Question

9．現(xiàn)今，中學生由于學業(yè)繁重幾乎都沒有在家承擔任何家務責任．你覺得中學生應該承擔家務責任嗎？請你對"承擔家務責任"的話題表達自己的看法．你的寫作應包括以下要點：
（1）你覺得現(xiàn)在孩子做家務的情況如何；
（2）你認為孩子在家是否需承擔家務的責任；
（3）以你自己或他人的體驗，說明承擔家務責任對孩子成長帶來的影響．
注意：詞數(shù)1 20左右．

Answer 1

分析 本文是根據(jù)所給要點內(nèi)容寫一篇關(guān)于中學生是否應該承擔家務責任的短文，屬于提綱作文．在寫作時人稱用第一人稱和第三人稱，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時．重要短語：take it for granted（認為…理所當然），take on （承擔），takes one's role in…（承擔角色/起作用），participate in …（參加），be proud to（高興，自豪），sympathetic（富有同情心），considerate（考慮周到的）．

解答 Nowadays，quite a lot of children take it for granted that their parents do all the chores at home．【高分句型】They are either busy playing games or doing their schoolwork but seldom wash dishes or do the cleaning．（孩子做家務的情況）
It is，of course，not right for children not to take on any responsibility in the household．As a family member，a child should help with the housework so that their parents can relax themselves after a long day's work..If a child takes his role in the housework，he will become sympathetic and considerate and would like to help others．（孩子在家是否需承擔家務的責任）
I used to be rather lazy．，not participating in any housework and did not understand my parents'hardship until one day  I helped clean the house．【高分句型】From then on，I found it a pleasure to help others and I am proud to say I have grown to be a person who can take on responsibilities both at home and at school．（以自己的體驗，說明承擔家務責任對孩子成長帶來的影響）

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點，并適當增加細節(jié)．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．