【題目】 全市英語演講比賽將在光明中學(xué)報(bào)告廳舉行。假設(shè)你是李華,你代表你校參加了賽前會(huì)議,會(huì)后請(qǐng)你用英語向參賽同學(xué)傳達(dá)以下信息:

1.陳述前往報(bào)告廳的校內(nèi)行走路線(如下圖)。

2.提醒選手參賽的注意事項(xiàng)(守時(shí)、講衛(wèi)生、守紀(jì)律等)。

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;

3.開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Hello,everyone.I'd like to tell you something about the English speaking competition of our city.___________________________________________________________________

答案

Hello,everyone.I’d like to tell you something about the English speaking competition of our city.When you are at the school gate,a beautiful fountain is in front of you.Then turn right and you will see an art gallery.Choose the main road and go straightforward.Turn left at the corner of the science building and go ahead,then you'll see the lecture hall at your right hand.You can't miss it.

During the competition,being punctual is very important.Whoever is late won't be allowed to enter.Please switch off your cell phones so as not to disturb others.Always keep quiet while waiting for your turn.It'sgood manners not to litter around.

Wish you good luck!

【解析】

試題分析:本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類寫作。對(duì)于這類文體應(yīng)有尤其注意審題。首先要審要求。書面表達(dá)試題一般都由情景要求兩部分構(gòu)成。情景中包括所寫材料的目的、對(duì)象、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容等,一般在書面表達(dá)題的前半部分;而要求一般在書面表達(dá)的后半部分,以注意形式給出,實(shí)際上是對(duì)考生提出的要求。因而考生對(duì)于題目所提供的說明,應(yīng)認(rèn)真分析、反復(fù)推敲,搞清提出的內(nèi)容要求,抓住所要表達(dá)的信息點(diǎn)。接下來就要審文體:高考書面表達(dá)的體裁一般有三大類:記敘文、說明文和應(yīng)用文,具體形式有便條,日記,通知,書信,人物、事情、情景故事的描寫,看圖說話,縮寫,擴(kuò)寫,改寫等,而此題明顯屬于通知類寫作。再次要審人稱:審查書面表達(dá)題干中隱含的讀者對(duì)象和撰寫人,即搞清楚此篇文章是由誰寫給誰的。寫稿人是誰一般都已明確指出,給出形式假設(shè)環(huán)境中的某人,如假設(shè)你是李華,寫作時(shí)即用第一人稱,即李華,即如本題。最后審時(shí)態(tài):根據(jù)情景判斷短文需要的主體時(shí)態(tài),即搞清楚要寫的是什么時(shí)候的事。此題目中題目已給出,考生須注意不要再自己擬題。而且本題中要點(diǎn)給出來的并不多,需要考生自行組織,自由發(fā)揮,需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出,但是寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯,而是要添加些內(nèi)容,使文章看起來更充實(shí),要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題,給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括,缺一不可。同時(shí)在寫作時(shí)要注意使用高級(jí)的詞匯與高級(jí)的句型,不要遺漏任何的要點(diǎn),同時(shí)要使用合適的連接詞來連接整個(gè)文章,使文章更有條理性。另外,在寫這種描寫方位的寫作時(shí),一定要語言簡(jiǎn)單而精煉。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】 本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,第一段中描寫位置的簡(jiǎn)單句子簡(jiǎn)潔而一目了然,值得大家學(xué)習(xí)。而類似Whoever is late won't be allowed to enter這種從句也為簡(jiǎn)單的寫作增色不少。

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