Question

16．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)如圖，結(jié)合實(shí)際，以Let's listen to minor's voice為題寫一篇英語短文，分析產(chǎn)生該社會(huì)現(xiàn)象的原因和后果，并發(fā)表你的看法，提出你的建議．

注意：1．仔細(xì)品味畫面內(nèi)容，要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，不要作簡(jiǎn)單描述．
2．詞數(shù)150左右．開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3．作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名．
4．提示詞匯：minor 未成年人；ideological morality思想道德．
Let's listen to minor's voice
The construction of minors'ideological morality is gradually becoming the hot issue of society．
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Answer 1

分析 本文為議論文．
寫作主題為：Let's listen to minor's voice（聽聽孩子的心聲）
寫作要點(diǎn)為：1，描述圖畫內(nèi)容：祖國的"棟梁"在成長(zhǎng)階段就被書包壓垮；2，分析原因；3，建議．

解答 Let's listen to minor's voice
The construction of minors'ideological morality is gradually becoming the hot issue of society． More commonly，minors have their own thoughts and their own understanding of surroundings sometimes extremely different from or even contrary to our adults'，frequently making us lose temper．
Minors have unbearable burdens on their shoulders．Besides heavy burden of different subjects，they have to attend different training courses at weekends to live up to parents'high expectations．Most often，society as well as parents and teachers value their achievements merely by their subject performances．Therefore，the construction of minors'ideological morality is ignored，thus causing lots of social and mental problems endangering the future of our nation．
Why not listen to minors'voice？Let's spare some time and chat with them in a relaxing atmosphere so that we can know their opinions and think what they think．Never force them to do what they are not willing to so that they can enjoy more free time and space．After all，they are humans．It's not human nature to make them always obey without question．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生需根據(jù)圖畫信息，揭示圖畫中的道理，根據(jù)所提供信息提煉文章的寫作主題，需了解寫作要點(diǎn)及寫作意圖，仔細(xì)構(gòu)思寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時(shí)注意積累詞匯及語法知識(shí)．