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請根據(jù)下面的英語小詩，展開適當(dāng)?shù)南胂�，并結(jié)合你的實(shí)際，寫一篇短文標(biāo)題為：My Great Father 的短文。
You are my loved dad
Loving and kind
Who always knows
Everything on my mind
You are my best friend
Caring and relied
Family by my side
注意：
1不得照抄短詩原文。
2必須結(jié)合短詩的內(nèi)容，結(jié)合自己實(shí)際，適當(dāng)展開。
3必須突出短詩主題，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫。
4短文不能寫成詩歌形式。
5詞數(shù)：100---120左右

Answer 1

One possible version：
Of all my beloved person，father is the one who has a deeper influence on my life 。he loves my bother and me，and is strict with us。He always inspires us to think for ourselves and put forward questions that are difficult to handle 。he willingly helps us out with his broad knowledge lasting patience 。with his help and encouragement，we’ve learnt how to analyze and settle problems。What a wonderful sea of “knowledge ”he leads us to 。
Father is also our spiritual stay。Every time we are in trouble and on the point of losing heart，he is in time to help us regain self-confidence and give our support in every possible way。He is more a best friend than a father 。besides ，father is highly respected by our neighborhood because he contributes more to community service 。in a word ，such is father ，a loving ，warm-hearted，caring and contributing persons 。no father in the world can match him，personally。

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