假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線（___），并在該詞下面寫出修改的詞。
注意:
1. 每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didn't have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and the actor couldn't be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn't believe my luck-not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!


【小題1】makes→making
【小題2】actor→actors
【小題3】but→so/and
【小題4】get后加it
【小題5】have---had
【小題6】everywhere→anywhere
【小題7】disappointing→disappointed
【小題8】out后加of
【小題9】去掉the
【小題10】had 改成have

解析試題分析：本文寫的是作者在上周六早晨在公園里散步時的好運：遇到了自己最喜歡的演員，不僅拍了照還簽了名。
【小題1】作者遇到了一群人在拍電影，此處拍電影應(yīng)該是crew的定語，是主動關(guān)系所以改成making.
【小題2】固定短語one of + 復(fù)數(shù)名詞….中的一個，所以改成actors.
【小題3】根據(jù)前后句義:我沒帶相機，匆忙的回去去取，是因果關(guān)系或者順承關(guān)系，所以改成so /but.
【小題4】根據(jù)句義：匆忙回家去取相機，少賓語，所以加上it。
【小題5】時態(tài)錯誤。by the time+過去的時間狀語，應(yīng)該用過去完成時：had done，所以改成had。
【小題6】根據(jù)句義是在任何地方都看不到那個演員，所以該成anywhere。
【小題7】形容詞錯誤。形容詞：--ed (人)感到….,---ing 令人….此句：我感到失望，所以改成disappointed。
【小題8】固定短語：walk out of 從….走出來，所以要加上of .
【小題9】冠詞錯誤。固定短語：in front of 在…前面（范圍之外），in the front of 在…前面（范圍之內(nèi)），所以去掉the。
【小題10】本句是一個倒裝句，把did提前構(gòu)成倒裝，也顯示了時態(tài)是過去時，所以謂語動詞要改成原形，所以改成have。
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