Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)網(wǎng)友Mike因工作出色被公司獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)中國(guó)十日游，他來(lái)信請(qǐng)你推薦旅游路線。請(qǐng)你給他回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表示祝賀；

2.推薦旅游路線；

3.期待回復(fù)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

I’m glad to know that you’ve been awarded by your company a ten-day tour of China because of your outstanding performance at work. Congratulations!

To guarantee you an enjoyable and unforgettable trip in China, I’ d like to recommend you one of the most popular and classic traveling routes. That is, a guided ten-day tour of Beijing, Shanghai and Hainan. During the trip, you can see many ancient historical sites, enjoy amazingly beautiful scenery, experience different Chinese traditions and cultures, and taste various Chinese cuisines. I’ m sure you’ll be deeply impressed by all of these.

What do you think of my recommendation? Looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件。請(qǐng)你向Mike推薦旅游路線。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式結(jié)構(gòu)：第一段表達(dá)祝賀；第二段推薦路線；第三段期待回信。

要求：1.表示祝賀；

2.推薦旅游路線；

3.期待回復(fù)。

第二步：列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

ten-day；outstanding；performance；congratulations；guarantee；recommend；one of the most …；historical sites；beautiful scenery；traditions and cultures；Chinese cuisines；be impressed by；recommendation；look forward to等

第三步：連詞成句

1. I’m glad to know that you’ve been awarded by your company a ten-day tour of China because of your outstanding performance at work.

2. I’ d like to recommend you one of the most popular and classic traveling routes. T

3. you can see many ancient historical sites, enjoy amazingly beautiful scenery, experience different Chinese traditions and cultures, and taste various Chinese cuisines.

4. I’ m sure you’ll be deeply impressed by all of these.

5. What do you think of my recommendation?

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

That is；and等

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改