Question

16．假如你是李磊，你的初中好友韓梅梅去美國讀書后你們失去了聯(lián)系，最近你得知 了他的郵箱地址，請給她寫一封郵件，要點如下：
1．問候?qū)Ψ剑�表達思念之情
2．回憶兩人的友情
3．希望兩人能繼續(xù)保持聯(lián)系． 
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 
3．開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
No man can make the most of his life without carefully and conscientiously striving to win the right kind of friends as he goes along．
沒有人
可以充分利用他的生活當他在生活中不夠謹慎小心去結交合適的朋友．
高分句型二：
In short，when we have established friendship，we ought to cherish and treasure it by means of words and deeds．
總之，當我們建立了友誼，我們應該用言行來珍惜和珍惜它．

解答 Dear Hanmeimei：
Friendship is a kind of human relations．It is a human instinct to make friends．When in trouble，we need friends to offer us help，support and encouragement．With success achieved，we also need friends to share our joys．
Friendship is also one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy．It implies loyalty，cordiality，sympathy，affection，and readiness to help．No man can make the most of his life without carefully and conscientiously striving to win the right kind of friends as he goes along（高分句型一）．
Knowing how valuable friendship is，we should be very careful in making friends．Real friends are those who have good character，superior ability and kindness of heart．Real friends can share all our sorrows and double all our joys．While making friends，we should take care to select those who have such fine qualities．Then we should treat our friends with courtesy，be careful not to interfere unreasonably with them，and not to ridicule their proceedings．We should forgive their failures and do our best to help them．In short，when we have established friendship，we ought to cherish and treasure it by means of words and deeds（高分句型二）．Only thus，can we develop real friendship and keep the sacred lamp of friendship burning all our life．
                                                                                                                 your frend
                                                                                                                 Lilei

點評 本書面表達為議論文，議論文是對某現(xiàn)象或觀點進行點評．寫作時，應注意按提出、分析、解決問題的邏輯順序來安排文章結構，使用足夠的論據(jù)來分層次論證自己的觀點．