Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你生活中的一個(gè)事例，就“自信”這一話題 ，用英語寫一篇短文。

If one has no confidence, there is little possibility that one can achieve anything when faced with hardships.

注意: 1. 無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語； 2. 除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限； 3. 內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例； 4. 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和班級(jí)名稱； 5. 字?jǐn)?shù)120左右。

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Answer 1

(One possible version)

Whatever one does , one should do it with confidence. Equipped with confidence, we can deal with any challenges and difficulties until we succeed.

When I entered Senior 3, I found myself faced with difficulty learning English, and even failed in my English exam. As a consequence I began to feel frustrated, losing confidence in myself. It was at this moment that my parents encouraged me, and my teachers gave me some valuable advice on my studies, telling me to be confident. With their help, I regained my confidence and began to make steady progress.

As the saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. If we are to make a difference, we should build up our confidence, which is of vital importance if we want to overcome any obstacles and finally achieve our goal.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇話題作文，以“自信”為話題，并結(jié)合一句格言，然后展開寫作。以第一人稱的形式書寫自己的一段經(jīng)歷，屬于記敘性文體�？梢园凑杖�段式結(jié)構(gòu)進(jìn)行寫作。首段開篇點(diǎn)題，指出自信的重要意義，中間進(jìn)行自身事例進(jìn)行詳細(xì)安排，注意時(shí)態(tài)使用一般過去最佳，畢竟是記敘自己的事例。末段要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)目偨Y(jié)升華，再次照應(yīng)開頭。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)上，注意段落間的銜接性，過渡性以及合理性，提倡句式的多樣性和連貫性，語言要生動(dòng)形象，言辭要優(yōu)美，給人一目了然的感覺。

【兩點(diǎn)說明】這篇范文很好，第一格言使用恰到好處，例如 where there is a will, there is a way.與主題較為貼切，反應(yīng)出自信的重要性。第二句式多變，非謂語動(dòng)詞的使用形象生動(dòng)，例如Equipped with confidence, we..較好。連接詞使用使文章過渡自然例如 as a consequence， with their help等等。同時(shí)使用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句 It was at this moment that my parents encouraged me...更加為文章增色不少。還有定語從句的運(yùn)用也很好，比如：we should build up our confidence, which is of vital importance if we want to overcome any obstacles and finally achieve our goal。 其中不乏較好的詞匯表達(dá)，體現(xiàn)了作者深厚的寫作功底。

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