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第五部分：寫作(共兩節(jié)，滿分35分)
第一節(jié)：短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題；每小題l分，滿分10分)
文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(∧)，并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。
刪詞：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：l、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞：
2、只允許修改l0處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分           
People like swimming in the summer because water makes them to feel cool. However, these years many people died while they were enjoyed themselves in water, and some of them were students. So some people are still not carefully in swimming. They often think they swim such well that nothing will happen on them in water. On hot summer days, if you will go swimming, remember that many good swimmer have died in water. They died because they were not careful, so don’t get into water when you are lonely. If you remember this, swimming will be safer.

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People like swimming in the summer because water makes them to feel
去掉                          去掉        
cool. However, these years many people died while they were enjoyed
enjoying          
themselves in water, and some of them were students. So some people are
But         
still not carefully in swimming. They often think they swim such well that
careful                                    so        
nothing will happen on them in water. On hot summer days, if you will go
to                                  去掉         
swimming, remember that many good swimmer have died in water. They
swimmers                          
died because they were not careful, so don’t get into water when you are lonely. If you remember
alone
this, swimming will be safer.

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