Question

【題目】作文： 第一節(jié)

為配合學(xué)校開展的垃圾分類工作，學(xué)生會向全校學(xué)生發(fā)出了“垃圾分類，從我做起”的倡議，請你代表學(xué)生會，用英語寫一封倡議書，內(nèi)容包括：

1）垃圾分類的做法；

2）垃圾分類的益處；

3）呼吁全體學(xué)生一起參加；

注意：1.詞數(shù)在80左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：垃圾分類garbage classification；廚余垃圾leftovers；廢舊電池used batteries。

Dear fellow students,

Our school has started a program of garbage classification.

第二節(jié)

假設(shè)你是某所中學(xué)的學(xué)生，鑒于世界很多地方水資源匱乏和世界水日的到來，你班開展了一系列節(jié)水宣傳活動。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，以日記的形式記錄當天的活動內(nèi)容。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

提示詞：宣傳材料leaflets；危機crisis

March 6,2017 Monday Sunny

Answer 1

【答案】第一節(jié)

Dear fellow students,
Our school has started a program of garbage classification. Different kinds of garbage are required to be sorted out and placed in different dustbins. Paper can be recycled, while leftovers can be collected as food for pigs or processed as fertilizer for plants. Above all, such harmful things as plastics and used batteries should not be mixed with other wastes.
The program is of great benefit. We will be able to save resources by making use of recyclable garbage and harmful things will not pollute our environment after special treatment.
Let’s work together for a better campus!
Yours,
Tom

第二節(jié)

March 22, 2017 Monday Sunny
Today is World Water Day. In the morning, we had a class meeting talking about what to do on this special day. Finally, we reached an agreement and immediately began to make preparations for the afternoon's activities. At 2:00 p.m., we went to the neighboring community to hand out leaflets,calling on people to save water. Around 3 0'clock, the expert we invited made an excellent speech on the current water crisis in China. He talked about the draught in the southeast and the severe shortage of water in our city. The speech had a strong appeal to all the people present including me.
After the speech, we had a discussion with our neighbors about various ways of saving water in our daily life.I suggested turning off the tap water immediately after use, and a granny came up with the ideas of reusing the water from kitchen, for example, the water after washing fruits and vegetables can be used to water flowers and so on.
Today, I have had a better understanding of the importance of saving water and really learned a lot about saving water.

【解析】第一篇作文為提綱類作文。第一要注意倡議書的格式。第二要注意要點齊全： 1）垃圾分類的做法；2）垃圾分類的益處；3）呼吁全體學(xué)生一起參加；人稱用第一人稱，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。

第二篇作文為圖畫類作文。注意日記的格式，人稱用第一人稱，時態(tài)用一般過去時。注意審題，要點要全。

【亮點說明】第一篇作文條理清楚，要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，運用了高級句子，如非限制性定語從句：Paper can be recycled, while leftovers can be collected as food for pigs or processed as fertilizer for plants.；高級詞匯：如above all, of great benefit等也為文章增色添彩。

第二篇作文描寫生動，詳略得當，層次分明，運用了高級句子，如定語從句the expert we invited made an excellent speech on the current water crisis in China.等；高級詞匯finally, had a better understanding of等的運用也為文章增色添彩。