Question

前不久，中央電視臺報道了貴州十歲男孩獨自照顧重病媽媽的故事，引起社會極大反響。假如你是某校高三學生李華，請根據以下要點用英語向某英語報社寫一封信。1、呼吁社會愛心捐助；2、學會感恩；3、結合實際談談你的看法。注意：1、信的開頭和結尾已給出，不記入總詞數；2、可根據內容要點適當發(fā)揮；詞數120個左右。

Dear editor ,

I’m a student of Senior Three . Not long ago , from CCTV, I learned that a ten-year-old boy in Guizhou was taking care of his seriously sick mother in hospital alone , by which I was deeply moved ….

 

 

 

 

Yours sincerely ,

Li H

 

Answer 1

Dear editor ,

I’m a  student of Senior Three . Not long ago , from CCTV, I learned that a ten-year-old boy in Guizhou was taking care of his seriously sick mother in hospital alone , by which I was deeply moved ….

China is a great country and Chinese people think highly of traditional virtues. It is what the child did for his mother that sets us students a good example. First, something should be done for the little boy and his family. We appeal to the whole society to donate money or do something else to help them out of the difficulty. Second, our schools should help to develop the spirit of being grateful to the society,  teachers as well as parents. Last but not least, our government should contitue,  To improve the medical insurance system, especially to support those who are badly in need of medical care.

As students, not only should we work hard at our lessons, but we should be helpful, bear gratitude in mind and overcome difficulties bravely and wisely.

Yours sincerely ,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本題是一篇材料作文。題目要求寫一篇關于愛心與感恩的信，來談談自己的看法和建議。作文要點已經給出，可以分段分別論述所給要點，注意作文的連貫性，做到流暢、自然。最好使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，應用了一些較好的詞組和句子： think highly of 高度評價，in need of需要，bear sth. in mind記住， It is what the child did for his mother that sets us students a good example. 這句話用了主語從句和強調句， appeal to sb. to do sth呼吁某人做..，as well as 不但…而且， To improve the medical insurance system, especially to support those who are badly in need of medical care.這句話用了定語從句， not only should we work hard at our lessons, but we should be helpful, bear gratitude in mind and overcome difficulties bravely and wisely.這句話用了倒裝句，還有文章使用了 First, Second, Last but not least這樣的關聯(lián)詞使文章更連貫。

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