Question

In today’s increasingly competitive world, that is of great importance to keep a positive attitude towards life. It is important because it could help us solve various problems in life. Taking English learning for example. In our efforts to grasp English, mistakes are unavoidable. In the way, mistakes are annoyed, but a positive attitude can make us realize that only making mistakes can we be expected to make progresses.
As we can see it, keeping a good attitude can help us to deal with mistakes correct and find confidence in time of sorrow. However, its importance cannot be denied.

Answer 1

小題1:that → it
小題2:could →can
小題3:taking→take             
小題4:the→a
小題5:annoyed→annoying
小題6:only后加by
小題7:progresses→prosess
小題8:去掉it
小題9:correct→correctly
小題10:however→Therefore

試題分析：
小題1:to keep a positive attitude towards life是句子的真正主語位于句末，故用形式主語it。
小題2:根據(jù)It is important ，故用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以could →can 。
小題3:祈使句，故用動(dòng)詞原形。
小題4: in a way是固定用法，意思是在某種程度上。
小題5:主語mistakes是物，故用annoying。
小題6:這里想說“只有通過犯錯(cuò)誤，我們才能期待取得進(jìn)步”，所以only后加by。
小題7:make progress是固定用法，意思是取得進(jìn)步。
小題8:as we can see是固定用法，意思是我們可以看到，所以去掉it。
小題9:來修飾動(dòng)詞短語deal with，故用副詞形式。
小題10:這里表示“因此”，所以however→Therefore。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：答題中注意句子中人稱和數(shù)是否一致，時(shí)態(tài)是否一致。各種詞性之間的區(qū)別以及一些常用句型，固定短語的應(yīng)用。一般的這類題型不會(huì)出現(xiàn)太復(fù)雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考查的就是我們的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)。平時(shí)應(yīng)注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結(jié)構(gòu)。修改前先細(xì)讀短文，標(biāo)出出錯(cuò)的位置，改完以后還得細(xì)讀短文，看看改過后的短文是否語意通順，符合邏輯。