Question

閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

When we read newspapers, we often come across such English words as "AIDS" and "PK." When we watch TV, we frequently hear words like "NBA" or "PM2.5." When we speak, we automatically use words like "OUT" or "Bye-bye." English words and expressions like these are getting popular. They have already become part of our daily language. And 239 English words have been included in the latest Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese.

The inclusion has started a heated discussion. A group of scholars signed a letter of complaint over the inclusion of these English words, which, they think, goes against Chinese language policies. They not only worry that Chinese is borrowing an increasing number of English words but are also concerned that the inclusion may hurt the dignity of the Chinese language. However, others are in favor of the inclusion because it is hard to say whether it will threaten the Chinese language. They believe the selection is mostly a result of their function and use in daily life.

寫作內(nèi)容：

用約30個(gè)單詞寫出上文概要；

用約120個(gè)單詞發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容包括：

（1）支持或反對(duì)漢語(yǔ)詞典收錄英語(yǔ)詞匯；

（2）用2-3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的觀點(diǎn)。

寫作要求：

1.可以支持文中任一觀點(diǎn)，但必須提供理由或論據(jù)；

2.闡述觀點(diǎn)或提供論據(jù)時(shí),不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句;

3.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

4.不必寫標(biāo)題。

評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

 

Answer 1

見解析

【解析】本文屬于任務(wù)型寫作，要求簡(jiǎn)單描述短文內(nèi)容并就短文內(nèi)容發(fā)表個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。仍然屬于議論文的范圍。所以使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和第三人稱。本文討論的話題是：很多英語(yǔ)單詞進(jìn)入中文詞典。要求針對(duì)這個(gè)現(xiàn)象發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。要點(diǎn)：1.簡(jiǎn)述短文：很多英語(yǔ)單詞進(jìn)入中文詞典。；2.發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)：支持者：隨著學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的人越來越多，人們也能理解這些詞的意思，不影響閱讀。而且這是文化融合的一種表現(xiàn)。反對(duì)者：這是一種文化污染，會(huì)影響這些詞的純真的發(fā)音等，同時(shí)對(duì)于那些英語(yǔ)不好的人還是一種偏見等；

本文要特別注意思想的辯證性，看待問題要一分為二，不能絕對(duì)化。寫作時(shí)要注意盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

 

支持：

Today, more and more English words find their way into the Chinese language. Even the Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese includes 239 English words. Some people support it while others do not.

Generally, I am in favour of the inclusion. As the number of English learners is on the rise, it's not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts. Besides, it is, on some occasions, more convenient to use English words. Most people nowadays use "IT" instead of its translation " xinxi jishu. " In our global village, we can see that it's not uncommon for one language to borrow words from other languages. In English, there are many words borrowed from Latin, French, or even Chinese. In fact. Chinese has never stopped taking words from other languages, say, "ganhu" or "minzhu" from Japanese.

So, it's safe to conclude that it is reasonable to include English which facilitates daily communication.

 

反對(duì)：

With English words getting popular in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them, leaving the public divided into two opposing groups: "For" and "Against."

I tend to take the " Against" side for two reasons. Firstly, this inclusion has actaally

polluted our motlier tongue. Sooner or later, many English accents will rise and fall with the four Chinese tones. And, rules don't tell us how to pronounce such English-turned Chinese words as "wifi" and "Out" in a Chinese way! Secondly, such an inclusion may give rise to prejudices of the educated against those with little knowledge of English. Just for one illustration, while college students take " Bye-bye" for granted when parting from each other, it may unconsciously hurt the feelings of someone who is used to "zaijian."

In short, not only has the inclusion poisoned Chinese, it may also bring about

distance between the Chinese people.