Question

【題目】隨著電腦普及率的提高，學(xué)生對(duì)字跡的重視程度降低了。據(jù)一項(xiàng)調(diào)查顯示，有 85.5%的中學(xué)生說自己的 字跡不好看，而他們又不想改善字跡，其理由有很大差別。

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖寫一篇 100 詞左右的英文短文，說明該現(xiàn)象并發(fā)表自己的看法。

中學(xué)生不想改善字跡的理由

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computer, students are paying less and less attention to their handwriting.

According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think their handwriting is poor. Yet for various reasons, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting. 51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice. 10.9 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.

In my opinion, beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. As the saying goes, writing style shows the man. In a word, I think more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.

【解析】

這篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，隨著電腦普及率的提高，學(xué)生對(duì)字跡的重視程度降低了。據(jù)一項(xiàng)調(diào)查顯示，有 85.5%的中學(xué)生說自己的 字跡不好看，而他們又不想改善字跡，其理由有很大差別。要求根據(jù)下圖寫一篇 100 詞左右的英文短文，說明該現(xiàn)象并發(fā)表自己的看法。人稱為第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：popularity流行，pay attention to重視，handwriting書寫，survey調(diào)查，various各種各樣的，improve提高，be busy with忙于，useless無用的，neat整潔的，beneficial有益的，As the saying goes常言道，In a word總之。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。