Question

20．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（A ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線（一），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
I went shopping with my wife．We had a lot of things to buy．We drive to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of a shop．An hour late，we  came back to the car．But it was strangely that we couldn't open the door．But we asked a policeman for help．He was glad to help us．A few minute later，he got the  door open．Just then a man came up and shouted angrily，"What are you doing my  car？"We were surprising and went to see the number of the car．What you think they did then？We had to speak sorry to the man again and again．

Answer 1

分析 文章講述了作者和妻子開車去購(gòu)物，回來(lái)時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)車門打不開，于是請(qǐng)警察幫忙．等車門打開后，一個(gè)人對(duì)我們大喊大叫，原來(lái)是開了別人的車門．

解答 I went shopping with my wife．We had a lot of things to buy．We drive to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of a shop．An hour late，we  came back to the car．But it was strangely that we couldn't open the door．But we asked a policeman for help．He was glad to help us．A few minute later，he got the  door open．Just then a man came up and shouted angrily，"What are you doing∧my  car？"We were surprising and went to see the number of the car．What you think they did then？We had to speak sorry to the man again and again．
詳解：
1．drive改為drove；時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤．文章講述的是過(guò)去的事情，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．
2．the去掉；短語(yǔ)搭配錯(cuò)誤．in front of在外部的前面，in the front of是內(nèi)部的前面．
3．late改為later；副詞錯(cuò)誤．late是遲到的意思，句意表達(dá)的是一個(gè)小時(shí)后，要用later來(lái)構(gòu)成．
4．strangely改為strange；形容詞錯(cuò)誤．句中strange作系動(dòng)詞的表語(yǔ)，要用形容詞形式．
5．But改為So；連詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是因果，不是轉(zhuǎn)折．
6．minute改為minutes；名詞錯(cuò)誤．句中有a few修飾，可數(shù)名詞要用復(fù)數(shù)．
7．加with；短語(yǔ)搭配錯(cuò)誤．do with處理…，常用短語(yǔ)．
8．surprising改為surprised；分詞錯(cuò)誤．句中surprise作系動(dòng)詞的表語(yǔ)，表示主語(yǔ)we的感受，要用過(guò)去分詞構(gòu)成的形容詞．
9．they改為we；代詞錯(cuò)誤．句意指代的是我們，不是他們．
10．speak改為say；短語(yǔ)搭配錯(cuò)誤．say sorry to sb向某人道歉．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語(yǔ)境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．常考的知識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來(lái)用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．