We suffer from pollution."I can't bear the smog in this city any more.It's getting worse and worse."said Wang Tao,a senior citizen in Beijing. "I'm often disturbed by loud noise during my work and sleep."said a senior student from Shenzhen. Many of China's waterways are largely unfit for direct human use because of industrialization. A 2015report estimated that 1.6million people in China die each year from heart,lung and stroke problems because of polluted air. New technologies have promoted the development of urbanization and economy.While economic growth may continue,the rewards of this growth may be opposed by the harm from the pollution unless environmental protection is increased. | Top pollution sources in Chinese cities Vehicles Coal-burining Airborne dust Mobile sources Industrial production |
分析 高分句型一:
Various forms of pollution,including air pollution,noise pollution,and water pollution,have increased with the fast development of Chinese cities,which has caused many problems and concerns.
高分句型二:
Only by applying sustainable development can we have a better world to live in.
句型一 which has caused many problems and concerns 該句是一個由which引導的非限制性定語從句,which在從句中做主語,替代前面的整個主句
句型二 Only by applying sustainable development can we have a better world to live in 該句中包含有一個倒裝句.當only位于句首且修飾介詞短語時,句子要使用部分倒裝:can we have a better world to live in 即主語同謂語部分助動詞進行位置的交換
此外,該書面表達中還包含有以下重要短語和高級詞匯:
with the development of 伴隨著..的發(fā)展 take measures to do sth 采取措施做某事 what's more 而且
該書面表達中的重要句型部分的從句的使用和高級短語和詞匯的使用,使得文章更層次分明,表述更加確切完整.
解答 As the diagram shows,vehicles,coal-burning,airborne dust,mobile sources and industrial production are the major pollution sources in Chinese cities,which have damaged our life,environment and even the future development.
Various forms of pollution,including air pollution,noise pollution,and water pollution,have increased with the fast development of Chinese cities,which has caused many problems and concerns.(污染情況說明)(高分句型一)
With the development of modern industry and expansion of urbanization,pollution is becoming more and more serious. Measures must be taken to balance city development and environmental protection.First of all,our government should make more strict laws to limit the use of private cars.What's more,we are supposed to raise our awareness of environmental protection and push for the use of alternative energy,such as solar energy and wind energy.Only by applying sustainable development can we have a better world to live in.(措施采。ǜ叻志湫投
點評 該書面表達為圖表類,通常都有一定的數(shù)據(jù)或者表格內(nèi)容作為寫作參考和依據(jù).考生應細致觀察圖表內(nèi)容,用準確的、簡單明了的語言將圖表內(nèi)容表達清楚.另外,平時應注意積累相應短語和詞匯,以使得行文有更多的亮點.
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