8.假定你是李華,你的美國(guó)筆友Lily來(lái)信說(shuō),她對(duì)你校最近舉辦的古詩(shī)詞朗誦大賽(the Ancient Poetry Recitation Contest)非常感興趣.請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示,用英語(yǔ)給她寫(xiě)一封回信,內(nèi)容包括:
1.比賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn);
2.舉辦活動(dòng)的目的;
3.你的參賽感受.
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3.開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好.
Dear Lily,
I'm very happy to receive your letter.
Knowing that you're interested in the Ancient Poetry Recitation Contest organized by our school,I am very pleased to tell you more details about it.(高分句型一)
The contest was held in the school gym from March 20thto March 23rd,aiming to arouse our enthusiasm for the Chinese traditional culture.(高分句型二)So fascinating and interesting was the contest that many students entered for it.The contest included reading and reciting the ancient poetry and I took part in both.I have had a deeper understanding about our excellent ancient poems,which I'meager to introduceto foreigners who also show interest in them.(高分句型三)
With best wishes.

Yours,
Li Hua

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華,你的美國(guó)筆友Lily來(lái)信說(shuō),她對(duì)你校最近舉辦的古詩(shī)詞朗誦大賽(the Ancient Poetry Recitation Contest)非常感興趣.請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示,用英語(yǔ)給她寫(xiě)一封回信,寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點(diǎn)包括:比賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn);舉辦活動(dòng)的目的;你的參賽感受.2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě).本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):be interested in 對(duì)…感興趣;aim to do目的是;take part in參加;be eager to do渴望做某事;
Knowing that you're interested in the Ancient Poetry Recitation Contest organized by our school,I am very pleased to tell you more details about it.(高分句型一)
The contest was held in the school gym from March 20th to March 23rd,aiming to arouse our enthusiasm for the Chinese traditional culture.(高分句型二)
I have had a deeper understanding about our excellent ancient poems,which I'm eager to introduce to foreigners who also show interest in them.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Lily,
       I am very happy to receive your letter. Knowing that you're interested in the Ancient Poetry Recitation Contest organized by our school,I am very pleased to tell you more details about it.(高分句型一)
      The contest was held in the school gym from March 20th to March 23rd,aiming to arouse our enthusiasm for the Chinese traditional culture.(高分句型二)So fascinating and interesting was the contest that many students entered for it.The contest included reading and reciting the ancient poetry and I took part in both.I have had a deeper understanding about our excellent ancient poems,which I'm eager to introduce to foreigners who also show interest in them.(高分句型三)
       With best wishes.
                                                              
Yours,
                                                              Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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