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第二節(jié) 書面表達(dá)（滿分35分）
假如你是某中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。最近，你校針對(duì)北大明年啟用“校長推薦制”在全校同學(xué)中進(jìn)行了一次網(wǎng)上調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所列情況給報(bào)社寫一封信，客觀地介紹調(diào)查的結(jié)果。

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：權(quán)錢交易 power-for-money deals
Dear editor,
I'm writing to tell you about the online survey we have recently carried out among all students in our school about the advantages and disadvantages of "headmaster recommendation".
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Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear editor,
I'm writing to tell you about the online survey we have recently carried out among all students in our school about the advantages and disadvantages of "headmaster recommendation".
We do have different opinions on this matter 。As few as 97 students of all the participants （3.7 %）are in favor of this practice 。Thinking the system can ，to a certain degree，change the current practice that one examination decides everything 。It is worth mentioning that 28 students （1.1 %）are neutrals who only want to know what polices Peking university will introduce。
However，the majority of the students ---2459（95.2 %）---are strongly against such a system 。In their opinion ，it's very difficult to effectively avoid power for money deals in the course of recommendation。Therefore，it might be unfair to some of the students who are ready to take the college entrance examination。
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua

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