Question

【題目】請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面四幅圖內(nèi)容，展開(kāi)合理想象，寫一篇短文，記述昨天發(fā)生在你叔叔身上的事。

注意：1、詞數(shù)：100詞左右；

2、參考詞匯：駕照driving license

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Answer 1

【答案】My uncle and his friends had dinner together yesterday. He was so happy that he drank too much. However, when it was time to go home, he insisted on driving home himself.

It was midnight and very dark. Soon, my uncle found the car out of his control. Shortly after he was not able to set the road clearly; he drove into a tree along the road and got seriously injured. Luckily enough, he was rushed to the nearest hospital. When he came back to life, he found a policeman waiting for him. He had to turn in the driving license and wait to be punished by law. How regretful he was!

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文。根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容，記述發(fā)生在你叔叔身上的時(shí)。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)。

第二步：列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

insist; out of control; shortly after; injure;luckily enough; rush to; come back to life; driving license

第三步：連詞成句

1. He was so happy that he drank too much. However, when it was time to go home, he insisted on driving home himself.

2. It was midnight and very dark. Soon, my uncle found the car out of his control.

3. Shortly after he was not able to set the road clearly.

4. He drove into a tree along the road and got seriously injured.

5. Luckily enough, he was rushed to the nearest hospital.

6. When he came back to life, he found a policeman waiting for him.

7. He had to turn in the driving license and wait to be punished by law.

第四步：潤(rùn)色修改

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。