Question

3．閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文．
Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala（考拉）at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia．All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining．You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off．That's right-sleep it off．The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy．
The reason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged and photographed by tourists，who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience．Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal，which is understandable．How would you react，my friend，if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round，furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you？
*考拉即樹(shù)袋熊
[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]
1．以約30個(gè)詞概括這段短文的內(nèi)容；
2．然后以約120個(gè)詞就"該不該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照"進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）人們?cè)趨⒂^動(dòng)物園時(shí)為什么喜歡和動(dòng)物拍照；
（2）假如你處在那些動(dòng)物的處境，你會(huì)有什么反應(yīng)；
（3）你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照．
[寫(xiě)作要求]
1．在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)．
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫．
The passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos．The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals．
The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people．Some think it a happy reminder of their visit to the zoo or the animals，while others may consider it just sort of fun to have．But anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the animals．
If I were in the same position as the animal in the zoo，my reaction would be very severe strongly against being photographed．No having peaceful surroundings to sleep，don't you suffer restless and fidgets．No doubt we do and so do the animals．
I think it necessary to ban tourists'taking pictures with animals，making a comfortable environment for them to live and regarding them as our friends，so as to found harmonious relations with animals．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇短文主要講述了考拉因總是被游客拍照打擾導(dǎo)致半睡半醒而不開(kāi)心，引出了該不該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照的作文話題．考生應(yīng)按照要求寫(xiě)作，先概括內(nèi)容，再根據(jù)三個(gè)要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容展開(kāi)自己的觀點(diǎn)．在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中所運(yùn)用的時(shí)態(tài)要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．除此以外，要注意寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中注意使用平時(shí)學(xué)到的短語(yǔ)和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性．
重要短語(yǔ)：
 sort of 有點(diǎn)，有幾分，no doubt，無(wú)疑，
高分句子：
1．The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people．本句含有重要句型The reasons why…，…的原因是．
2．No having peaceful surroundings to sleep，don't you suffer restless and fidgets．本句前半句為現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)，豐富句子內(nèi)容．

解答 The passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos．The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals．（概括短文內(nèi)容）
    The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people．（高分句型）Some think it a happy reminder of their visit to the zoo or the animals，while others may consider it just sort of fun to have．But anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the animals．（描述為何人類(lèi)喜歡和動(dòng)物拍照）
    If I were in the same position as the animal in the zoo，my reaction would be very severe strongly against being photographed．No having peaceful surroundings to sleep，don't you suffer restless and fidgets．（高分句型）No doubt we do and so do the animals．（假設(shè)我是動(dòng)物的反應(yīng)）
    I think it necessary to ban tourists'taking pictures with animals，making a comfortable environment for them to live and regarding them as our friends，so as to found harmonious relations with animals．（總結(jié)，認(rèn)為不應(yīng)該拍照）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 要想使自己的書(shū)面表達(dá)得高分，首先要做到揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)避短．"揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)"就是發(fā)揮自身的優(yōu)勢(shì)，使用熟練掌握的句型，"避短"就是避開(kāi)自己的弱點(diǎn)，盡量做到不犯錯(cuò)誤或少犯錯(cuò)誤，這是讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)得分的關(guān)鍵所在．