Question

I had a interesting dream last night. I dreamedthat I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn’t lose heart and keptrunning. All the students on the playground cheer me on, “ Come on!” I was so encouraging that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if flying like a superman. In the end, I got to the finishing line first.I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that timeI woke up and found me still in bed!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

I had a interesting dream last night. I dreamedthat I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run

An                                                                去掉to  

very fast and fell behind. So I didn’t lose heart and keptrunning. All the students on the

But

playground cheer me on, “ Come on!” I was so encouraging that I ran faster and fast till I caught up

cheered                       encouraged                 faster

∧all the other runners. I felt as if flying like a superman. In the end, I got to the finishing line first.

with

I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my

proud

classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that timeI woke up and found me still in bed! 

Classmates                                                    myself

 a改成 an

 去掉to，

 So改成 But

 cheer 改成Cheered

 encouraging encouraged

 fast 改成faster

 caught up 后面加with

 proudly改成proud

 classmate改成 Classmates

 me 改成myself

【解析】

試題分析：

 dream是可數(shù)名詞，這里是指又一個(gè)有趣的夢(mèng)。

 情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后面直接接動(dòng)詞原形。

 上下文存在轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。

 本文是一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主。

 encouraging修飾物“令人鼓舞的”，encouraged修飾人“受到鼓舞的”

 越來(lái)越快，都應(yīng)該使用比較級(jí)。

 固定詞組catch up with追上，趕上

 feel后面接形容詞，構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)。

 one of 后面要接復(fù)數(shù)名詞。 

 用反身代詞加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣

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