Question

智能手機(jī)越來越多地受到年輕人青睞，然而過多地玩智能手機(jī)可能會(huì)使你皮膚松馳，變成“手機(jī)臉”。假如你是高三學(xué)生李華，你們班的英文班會(huì)將就此話題展開討論，請你用英文擬一篇短文備用。
要點(diǎn)提示：
1.肯定智能手機(jī)的好處；
2.說明年輕人依賴智能手機(jī)的現(xiàn)象；
3.指出過多玩智能手機(jī)的壞處；
4.給出你的意見。Smartphones 智能手機(jī)
注意：
1.詞數(shù)：120詞左右；
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

Smartphones have really changed our daily life. We can make contact with the world at any time and any place if we have such a device in our hand. However, with the increasing popularity of smartphones among young people, some, especially those who are addicted to their phones, may feel anxious once they are disconnected from them.
There are several disadvantages of using the smartphone for too long. It is now believed that using smartphones could probably cause facial skin and muscle to hang loose if people spend an increasing amount of time sitting with their heads bent and in the same position for a long time. That is horrible.
In my opinion, we students should be aware of the harm of excessive use of smartphones. And we’d better reduce the time of using smartphones in everyday life.

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點(diǎn)的議論文作文，主題是智能手機(jī)的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)，給出了大部分要點(diǎn)，還要考生給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，先是肯定智能手機(jī)的好處；，然后指出過多玩智能手機(jī)的壞處；
最后是自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求考生用地道的英語表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求觀點(diǎn)明確，駕馭語言的能力強(qiáng)，選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫作的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。
點(diǎn)評：本文屬于正反方觀點(diǎn)作文，但是要點(diǎn)給出的不算多，需要考生自己添加部分。在分析部分已經(jīng)詳細(xì)說明了。在寫作的時(shí)候要適合合適的連接詞來連接各要點(diǎn)，使他們成為整體。要選擇高級的詞匯和句型，讓文章有變化，有層次。