Question

Sometime in February, my teacher told us about the city speech contest, its topic was “People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”. I thought of my grandma would be my perfect topic. Then I carefully prepared for contest. A couple of weeks later, after the first round I was choosing to be one of the seven finalists! The final was held soon. I was the sixth to presenting the speech. How a relief when I finished it! After the last person finished, the judge made their final decisions and announced that I have won first prize. The audience were going wildly clapping and cheering! I was extremely happy. It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember it.

Answer 1

小題1:its前加and 或把its改為whose或者刪掉topic后的was
小題2:thought 后刪of
小題3:for 后加the
小題4:choosing →chosen
小題5:presenting→ present
小題6:How→ What
小題7:judge →judges
小題8:have →had
小題9:wildly→ wild
小題10:such →so

試題分析: 在本文中作者講述了自己參加市演講比賽的情況，演講的話題是“People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”。作者認真地準備了這次演講比賽，結(jié)果榮獲了演講比賽一等獎，他永遠也不會忘記那一刻。
小題1:its前加and 或把its改為whose或者刪掉topic后的was 。  its topic was “People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”.分析結(jié)構(gòu)可知前后兩個句子中間沒連詞，所以可以把its改為whose成為定語從句，也可以在its前加and構(gòu)成并列句；也可以去掉topic成為獨立主格，故答案是its 改為whose或 its前加and 或刪topic后的was 。
小題2:thought 后刪of 。I thought of my grandma would be my perfect topic. 介詞of后只跟名詞，代詞動名詞做賓語，不跟陳述句做賓語從句，故去掉of。
小題3:for 后加the 。 Then I carefully prepared for contest. 此處的contest是特指上文提到的演講比賽，故前面加定冠詞the。
小題4:choosing →chosen 。I was choosing to be one of the seven finalists! 句子主語I 和謂語動詞之間是被動關(guān)系，應(yīng)該用被動語態(tài)，所以把choosing改為chosen。
小題5:presenting→ present 。I was the sixth to presenting the speech. 修飾序數(shù)詞the first、the second、the last等后面用動詞不定式，所以把presenting改為present。
小題6:How→ What 。How a relief when I finished it ! 感嘆句中對名詞進行感嘆需要用what，句型：what +（形容詞）名詞+主語+謂語，所以把How改為What。
小題7:judge →judges 。the judge made their final decisions. 根據(jù)句中的their decisions可以判斷有多名裁判，故把judge改為judges。
小題8:have →had have →had and announced that I have won first prize. 主句謂語動詞是一般過去時，賓語從句應(yīng)該用過去時的相應(yīng)形式，根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容可以判斷應(yīng)該用過去完成時，故把have改為had。
小題9:wildly→ wild 。The audience were going wildly clapping and cheering ! 動詞go在句中是系動詞，后面應(yīng)該跟形容詞做表語，故把wildly改為wild。
小題10:such →so 。It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember it. 在such/so…..that句型中，such 修飾名詞，so修飾形容詞和副詞，所以把such改為so。