Question

5．假如你是李明，請你就本校食堂的狀況給校長寫一封投訴信，內(nèi)容可涉及食堂的飯菜質(zhì)量、價格、環(huán)境和服務(wù)等．
注意：（1）可適當添加細節(jié)使文章連貫；詞數(shù)100左右；
（2）信得開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear President，
My name is Li Ming，a junior from the Civil Engineering School．I am writing to make a complaint about the canteen service of our school．
The foc us of the complaint is the poor qua lity and high price of the food．In the first place，the rice is very hard，the steam bread is often cold，and the vegetables are always overcooked．In addition，the price of the food is so high that many poor students are burdened heavily，Under these circumstances，I find it impossible for us students to fully concentrate on the study and enjoy the campus life．
I will be very obliged if you can consider my complaint seriously．I do hope the service of the canteen will be much improved as soon as possible．Thank you for your time and kind consideration．
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming   

Answer 1

分析 這是就本校食堂的狀況給校長寫一封投訴信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點明書信目的；二投訴的問題；三表示感謝．
高分句型：
1．In addition，the price of the food is so high that many poor students are burdened heavily．句子里In addition和In the first place呼應(yīng)，表示"此外"； so…that 表示"如此…以至于"．
此外，飯菜的價格太高，以至于貧窮的學(xué)生負擔很重．
2．I do hope the service of the canteen will be much improved as soon as possible．句子里do 是強調(diào)謂語動詞hope的助動詞； as soon as possible表示"盡快"．
我希望餐廳的服務(wù)能夠盡快提高．

解答 Dear President，
    My name is Li Ming，a junior from the Civil Engineering School．I am writing to make a complaint about the canteen service of our school．（點明書信目的）
    The focus of the complaint is the poor qua lity and high price of the food．In the first place，the rice is very hard，the steam bread is often cold，and the vegetables are always overcooked．In addition，the price of the food is so high that many poor students are burdened heavily．【高分句型一】Under these circumstances，I find it impossible for us students to fully concentrate on the study and enjoy the campus life．（投訴的問題）
    I will be very obliged if you can consider my complaint seriously．I do hope the service of the canteen will be much improved as soon as possible．【高分句型二】Thank you for your time and kind consideration．（表示感謝）
                                           Yours sincerely，
                                                 Li Ming

點評 考查開放類作文．
開放類作文給的要點比較少，這就要求學(xué)生發(fā)揮想象，確定寫作要點，但是切記要點貼題，如果跑題了，則會影響得分．