Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Once a man got on a bus for New York. He hid in toilet, because he did not want to pay. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, "There's a bum(流浪漢) in the toilet. Tell the bus driver." The message was passing from person to person. But anywhere along the way, it changed. The bus driver was told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came to, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. This soon caused a 15-miles-long traffic jam. Under the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no bomb!

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】in → in the

【2】her → him

【3】say → said

【4】passing → passed

【5】anywhere → somewhere

【6】immediate → immediately

【7】去掉 to

【8】or → and

【9】miles → mile

【10】Under → with

【解析】

【1】in → in the 此處表示雙方都知道的廁所，特指，故在in后面加the 。

【2】her → him 根據(jù)上文“a man”，故her → him。

【3】say → said 前后是并列關(guān)系，所以此處用一般過去時態(tài)，故say → said。

【4】passing → passed 句意：信息被傳遞。此處用一般過去時態(tài)的被動語態(tài)，故passing → passed。

【5】anywhere → somewhere 句意：沿著這種方式傳遞下去，信息的某些地方改變了。故把a(bǔ)nywhere → somewhere。

【6】immediate → immediately 句意：他立刻停下車并給公安局打電話。副詞修飾動詞，故把immediate → immediately。

【7】去掉 to 句意：當(dāng)警察來的時候。To是多余的，故去掉 to。

【8】or → and 句意：他們告訴乘客下車并停留在遠(yuǎn)處。此處表示遞進(jìn)的并列關(guān)系，故把or → and。

【9】miles → mile 此處是一個符合形容詞，名詞用單數(shù)形式，故把miles → mile。

【10】Under →With 固定詞組：with the help of在----的幫助下，故把Under → With。

【知識歸納】

以e結(jié)尾的形容詞變成副詞時，有的直接加ly ;有的把e去掉再加ly.

possible---possibly； simple---simply; gentle---gently; terrible---terribly; true---truly; flexible---flexibly

immediate--- immediately; brave---bravely; wise---wisely；active---actively