Question

12．萬水河坐落在我校東邊．夏季已紀(jì)來臨，為了同學(xué)們的安全考慮，請就萬水河游覽安全問題寫一則具有警告和號召作用的文章．這篇文章將被刊登在我校英語報(bào)Superview 上．
內(nèi)容包括：
1．禁止垂釣
2．禁止游泳
3．禁止亂扔垃圾
4．你個(gè)人的建議
注意：
1．字?jǐn)?shù)110左右．
2．文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)．
3．可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫．
提示詞：Wanshui River．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
To begin with，out of safety，going fishing is forbidden，because chances are that you may fall into the water and drowned
高分句型二：
Personally，you can sit on the bench along the river bank，enjoying the scenery．
句型一 ①going fishing is forbidden 該句主語為動(dòng)名詞短語作主語，此時(shí)應(yīng)注意謂語應(yīng)該用單數(shù)
           ②because chances are that you may fall into the water and drowned 該句是一個(gè)由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，且句中有一個(gè)chance are that固定用法，意為：可能．．
句型二 enjoying the scenery 該部分是現(xiàn)在分詞在句中作伴隨狀語
此外還有以下高級詞匯和重要短語：to begin with   more and more..

解答 With summer approaching，the Wanshui River，located to the east of our school，is becoming more and more beautiful．At the same time，many students are attracted by its beauty．While you visit the river，the following must be followed．（提出活動(dòng)方案）
   To begin with，out of safety，going fishing is forbidden，because chances are that you may fall into the water and drowned．（高分句型一） Besides，you mustn't swim in the river．The reason is that the water is not quite clean．Consideering picturesque scenery，please don't litter．（禁止事項(xiàng)）Personally，you can sit on the bench along the river bank，enjoying the scenery．（高分句型二）Additionally，taking pictures is a good choice．（提出建議）
   I hope that with our joint efforts we can build up a pleasant environment．

點(diǎn)評 該書面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點(diǎn)．考生在平時(shí)應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時(shí)盡量做到將要點(diǎn)與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．