Question

15．第三節(jié)　書面表達(dá) （30分）
假定你是李華．你班同學(xué)決定為小明舉辦生日聚會(huì)．請你寫信邀請外教Susan參加，要點(diǎn)包括：
（1）時(shí)間：周五晚8點(diǎn)至9點(diǎn)
（2）地點(diǎn)：學(xué)生俱樂部
（3）內(nèi)容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戲等
（4）要求：備小禮物
注意：（1）詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好；（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以便行文連貫；（3）答案必須寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上．
Hi，Susan，
We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday．We'd like to invite you to the party．We want to give him a surprise，so please keep quiet about it． We'll gather at the Students'Club at 8 p．m．this Friday，after the evening classes． And it's going to last about an hour．We each will prepare a little present．When he comes，we'll light the candles and sing"Happy Birthday"together for him． Then the cake will be cut and we'll sing songs and play games． It'll be nice to see how excited he will be．I'm sure you'll have a good time at the party，too．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是應(yīng)用文，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫一封信，邀請外教Susan參加我班為小明舉辦的生日聚會(huì)，主要要點(diǎn)：（1）時(shí)間：周五晚8點(diǎn)至9點(diǎn)（2）地點(diǎn)：學(xué)生俱樂部（3）內(nèi)容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戲等（4）要求：備小禮物．屬提綱作文．在寫作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱為主．時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來時(shí)為主．
重要短語：throw a surprise party （舉辦驚喜派對(duì)…），invite sb to sth （邀請某人去某處…），keep quiet （保持安靜），light the candles （點(diǎn)蠟燭），have a good time （玩得開心），would like to do（想要做某事）．

解答 Hi，Susan，
 We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday．We'd like to invite you to the party．We want to give him a surprise，so please keep quiet about it．【高分句型】We'll gather at the Students'Club at 8 p．m．this Friday，after the evening classes．（時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)）And it's going to last about an hour．We each will prepare a little present．When he comes，we'll light the candles and sing"Happy Birthday"together for him．【高分句型】Then the cake will be cut and we'll sing songs and play games．（內(nèi)容和要求）It'll be nice to see how excited he will be．I'm sure you'll have a good time at the party，too．
       Yours，
       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．