Question

（2009.安徽卷）書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）

假設(shè)你正在參加全省中學(xué)生英語演講比賽，請你針對有些父母經(jīng)常翻看孩子日記或書包這一現(xiàn)象，寫一篇演講稿，陳述你的觀點(diǎn)。

演講稿的主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：

認(rèn)為同學(xué)們不必為此苦惱；

希望能夠體諒父母的苦衷；

建議與父母進(jìn)行交流和溝通。注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Good morning, ladies and gentleman.

Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries.

                                                                            

                                                                            

Thank you!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.

Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into any trouble. They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are dong it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around—thy are bound to read it.

Thank you!

【解析】本文屬于提綱類作文，體裁為應(yīng)用文中的演講稿，題材的現(xiàn)實(shí)性強(qiáng)，考生的話語較多，顯見這種作文，難度不大，考生應(yīng)注意基本語言和句式的運(yùn)用，以及上下文的過渡。