分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息以"My Dreaming Senior Year(理想高三)"為題寫一篇100-120詞的英語短文參加比賽,寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個要點:簡單做自我介紹;高三學習時間設計;業(yè)余活動的設想等. 2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達:be busy with 忙于;prepare for為…作準備;besides另外; to be honest誠實的說;keep healthy保持健康;all in all總之;get along with事情進展,相處;
Next term,I'll be busier with my study,preparing for the coming college entrance examinations.(高分句型一)
Also,I want to take part in some sports and amusing clubs held by our class or school,which can help us to keep healthy and active.(高分句型二)
All in all,I want to live a busy but interesting life,getting along well with study and life in the coming year.(高分句型三)
解答 I am Li Hua,a student from Xinhua Senior High School.Next term,I'll be busier with my study,preparing for the coming college entrance examinations.(高分句型一)Besides,time is limited and I'll make a most scientific and proper schedules to study harder and more effectively.To be honest,I don't want to be kept too busy with my study all day long.Just as the proverb says,"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy."So we need some free time to relax our mind,especially at the weekends and on holidays.Also,I want to take part in some sports and amusing clubs held by our class or school,which can help us to keep healthy and active.(高分句型二)
All in all,I want to live a busy but interesting life,getting along well with study and life in the coming year.(高分句型三)
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應,用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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