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5．假設(shè)你是育才中學(xué)學(xué)生會主席李華．你校將舉辦一次英語演講比賽（speech contest），希望附近某大學(xué)的外籍教師Smith女士來做評委．請參照以下比賽通知給她寫一封信．

英語演講比賽 主題：人與自然 時(shí)間：6月15日下午2：00-5：00 地點(diǎn)：501教室 參賽選手：10名學(xué)生 聯(lián)系人：李華（電話44876655） 歡迎大家光臨

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Dear Ms．Smith，
I'm Li Hua，Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School，which is close to your university．I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in Room 501 in our school on June 1st．It will start at 2：00 pm and last for about three hours．Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic"Man and the Nature"．We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you．Please call me at 44876655，if you have any questions．
I am looking forward to your reply．
With best wishes，
Li Hua

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分析 本文為應(yīng)用文，根據(jù)對通知圖片的理解寫一封信，希望附近某大學(xué)的外籍教師Smith女士來做校英語演講比賽評委．寫作要點(diǎn)：演講主題；時(shí)間；地點(diǎn)；參賽選手；聯(lián)系人及方式．既是提綱作文又是圖畫類作文．基本時(shí)態(tài)為一般將來時(shí)，人稱以第一、三人稱為主．重要短語：be close to …（接近，靠近…），invite sb to do sth（邀請某人做某事），deliver speeches （發(fā)表演講），accept our invitation（接受我們的邀請），It is convenient for sb （對某人來說是方便的），spend money doing（做某事花費(fèi)錢），look forward to sth/doing （期望某事/做某事），write to sb（寫信給某人）．

解答 Dear Ms Smith，
I'm Li Hua，Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School，which is close to your university．I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in Room 501 in our school on June 1st．（演講地點(diǎn)）It will start at 2：00 pm and last for about three hours．（演講時(shí)間）Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic"Man and the Nature"．（參賽選手、主題）We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you．Please call me at 44876655，if you have any questions．（聯(lián)系方式）
   I am looking forward to your reply．
   With best wishes，
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 寫好這類圖片及提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，并認(rèn)真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，發(fā)揮想象，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．