3.假如你叫李華,你們的外教老師Mr Jenkins邀請(qǐng)你和幾名同學(xué)今晚去他的公寓參加他的生日派對(duì).但你臨時(shí)有事不能赴約.請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)一封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:
1.祝他生日樂(lè);
2.表示歉意;
3.說(shuō)明原因;
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右:2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫.
Dear Mr Jenkins,
Happy birthday to you!It is my honour to be invited to your birthday party tonight.But I am terribly sorry to say that I can't accept your invitation.Just now I received a notice by a company which offered me a chance to have an interview tomorrow.(高分句型一)To broaden my horizon and gain some experience,I applied to the company for a temporary position in my winter holiday.(高分句型二)I cherish it the chance so much that I have to make prepare full preparations for it.(高分句型三)You are not only my best teacher but also my best friend.It is sure that you will give me your understanding.
A bunch of flowers with my best wishes will reach you tonight.Happy birthday to you again.
Yours
Li Hua.

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文,根據(jù)提示信息假如你叫李華,你們的外教老師Mr Jenkins邀請(qǐng)你和幾名同學(xué)今晚去他的公寓參加他的生日派對(duì).但你臨時(shí)有事不能赴約.請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)一封郵件,寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點(diǎn)包括:祝他生日樂(lè);表示歉意;說(shuō)明原因;2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě).本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):broaden  horizons拓展視野;apply to申請(qǐng);make prepare full preparations for 為…做好充分準(zhǔn)備;not only,but also 而且;
Just now I received a notice by a company which offered me a chance to have an interview tomorrow.(高分句型一)
To broaden my horizon and gain some experience,I applied to the company for a temporary position in my winter holiday.(高分句型二)
I cherish it the chance so much that I have to make prepare full preparations for it.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Mr Jenkins,
       Happy birthday to you!It is my honour to be invited to your birthday party tonight.But I am terribly sorry to say that I can't accept your invitation.Just now I received a notice by a company which offered me a chance to have an interview tomorrow.(高分句型一)To broaden my horizon and gain some experience,I applied to the company for a temporary position in my winter holiday.(高分句型二)I cherish it the chance so much that I have to make prepare full preparations for it.(高分句型三)You are not only my best teacher but also my best friend.It is sure that you will give me your understanding.
       A bunch of flowers with my best wishes will reach you tonight.Happy birthday to you again.
                                                                                                 Yours,
                                                                                                 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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