Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Sam went to the cinema the other night. Entered the cinema, he thought of taking off his coat. But the cinema was very cold and he has to keep his coat on. As there weren’t much space between the rows, his legs began to ache shortly after he took up his seat. Worse still, they found it difficult to breath easily. Looking around, he saw a lot of people smoking. At last the film started. That made him angry was that the person in front was wearing so big hat that he could hardly see the screen. To top it all, people all around him either told jokes nor laughed loudly. However, Sam missed most of the dialogue.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】Entered→Entering

【2】has→had

【3】weren’t→ wasn’t

【4】去掉up

【5】they→he

【6】breath→breathe

【7】That→What

【8】hat前加a

【9】nor→or

【10】However → Therefore / So

【解析】

試題分析：通過(guò)改錯(cuò)的短文，考查學(xué)生對(duì)固定搭配，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)，名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)問(wèn)題等。

【1】Entered→Entering 考查現(xiàn)在分詞。Enter和he之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以這里需用現(xiàn)在分詞。

【2】has→had考查時(shí)態(tài)。該句時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，所以這里動(dòng)詞需用過(guò)去式，故將has改為had。

【3】weren’t→ wasn’t考查there be句型。該句為there be句型，be動(dòng)詞的單復(fù)數(shù)取決于其后的名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)，這里much space為不可數(shù)名詞，所以這里be動(dòng)詞需用單數(shù)形式。

【4】去掉up考查短語(yǔ)。take one’s seat坐下，為固定短語(yǔ)，所以這里需將up去掉。

【5】they→he考查代詞。由前文的he可知，這里指的是他感覺到呼吸困難，所以需改為he。

【6】breath→breathe考查動(dòng)詞。Breath為名詞，這里需改為動(dòng)詞breathe。

【7】That→What考查關(guān)系詞。這里that不能引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句.需用what做雙重身份。

【8】hat前加a考查短語(yǔ)。So +形容詞+冠詞+名詞，這里hat為單數(shù)形式，所以需用冠詞a。

【9】nor→or 考查短語(yǔ)。Either……or或者……，兩者之一，為固定搭配，所以需將nor改為or。

【10】However → Therefore / So考查連詞。這里的意思是周圍的人們或者講笑話，或者大聲笑，所以他錯(cuò)過(guò)了很多對(duì)話，這里是因果關(guān)系however然而，表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故改為therefore/so。