Question

作為中學(xué)生，你肯定經(jīng)歷過多次考試，體驗過成功，也遭遇過失敗。請你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以Different Attitudes Towards Failure in Exams 為題，簡要概述中學(xué)生普遍存在的對考試失敗的兩種態(tài)度，并結(jié)合自身實際，說明你的觀點。

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詞數(shù)：120左右，開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總數(shù)。

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參考詞匯：分析原因  analyze the cause

Different Attitudes Towards Failure in Exams

  Failure in exams is such a common thing that every student has suffered from it. Different students have different attitudes to failure.

                                                                               

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 Different Attitudes Towards Failure in Exams

  Failure in exams is such a common thing that every student has suffered from it. Different students have different attitudes to failure. Some students feel so disappointed at their poor performance in exams that they have fear and anxiety about exams. Even worse, they may lose heart and give up.

  However, others regard failure as part of the process towards their final goal, taking an active attitude towards failure. Not only do they encourage themselves to be self-confident but they also find out and analyze the causes so that they will no longer make similar mistakes.

  As we all know, failure is the mother of success. Even great men may have failed many times before they finally succeed. In other words, failure can teach us more than success does. We need to have s good state of mind to face challenges in our future life.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于正反觀點類議論文，討論的話題是中學(xué)生對待失敗態(tài)度。本題材上來說屬于議論文，所以使用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要以第三人稱為主，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，使用第一人稱。要點：1.人人都經(jīng)歷過成功和失敗，但是不同的人對待失敗有不同的觀點。2. 當(dāng)考試沒有取得理想成績時，有些人感覺失望，喪失信心，不再繼續(xù)努力。3. 當(dāng)考試失敗時，有些人分析并找出失敗的原因，鼓勵自己，增強自信，避免再犯同樣的錯誤。4.你的觀點：失敗乃成功之母。我們要從失敗中得出教訓(xùn)，完善自我，取得更大的進步。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點說明】：本文最大的特殊就是高級句式的運用。如Not only do they encourage themselves to be self-confident but they also find out and analyze the causes so that they will no longer make similar mistakes.中not only后面接的部分倒裝句的形式。As we all know, failure is the mother of success.中as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，以及諺語failure is the mother of success。

考點：考察正反觀點類短文