Question

2．閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事．
In 1989，fresh out of high school，I had the difficult task of choosing a career path before college started in three months．In those days in Pakistan，there were limited options：becoming a doctor or an engineer，or entering the financial world after getting a business degree．I wasn't interested in engineering，so that I was left with medicine or business．I couldn't decide．
My uncle，one of the elders in the family，suggested that I do a work placement to experience it for a month in

an international company followed by a month in a hospital．After that，I could make a decision．It seemed like a brilliant idea．
I was accepted for a month's placement at a foreign bank in Karachi．I got a feel for how the world of finance functioned，made new friends，and generally enjoyed the mostly easy-going work surroundings．
The month passed rapidly，and soon I began working at a leading hospital in Karachi．The experience couldn't have been more different．The hospital had an intense environment．The days started early （at 7am，compared to 9am at the bank），and were filled with endless duties．And the night calls!This was crazy，working all day，through the night，and again the next day．
I began thinking about my two experiences．The bank had offered a more relaxing atmosphere，better working hours and less stress．The hospital was full of excitement，and unpredictability，but the studying and training was difficult．It seemed that the business option was going to win out．
Near the end of my month at the hospital，I was driving home after an especially busy night call．In front of me was a public bus，with college students sitting on the top．As the driver weaved through traffic，I could see the boys shaking from side to side．
注意：
1．所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右；
2．應(yīng)使用 5 個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；
3．續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；
4．續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語．
Paragraph 1：
Suddenly，a boy fell off the back of the bus．He hit the road face down and rolled over．He lay motionless in the middle of the road as the bus drove away quickly．The cars directly behind the bus braked to avoid the boy，but none stopped．I knew that if the boy was bleeding into his brain，he could die soon．I stopped my car．I lifted his unconscious body into my car with the help of some passersby and raced back to the hospital．
Paragraph 2：
The next day，when I went to see the boy，all his family got up，with grateful smiles on their faces．The mother held my hands and started weeping．"Son，you are an angel，"she repeated over and over again．After comforting her，I went over to the boy．He managed to smile and squeeze my hand．No words were spoken between us-none was needed．I spent the rest of the day in a state of excitement，the most fabulous mood I had ever experienced．Driving home that evening，I knew what I wanted to do for the rest of my life．My career path became crystal clear at that moment．．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
I knew that if the boy was bleeding into his brain，he could die soon
我知道如果這個(gè)男孩血液流入他的大腦，他會(huì)死的很快．
高分句型二：
Driving home that evening，I knew what I wanted to do for the rest of my life．My career path became crystal clear at that moment．
開車回家的那天晚上，我知道我想做的事在我的余下的生命里．在那一刻，我的職業(yè)生涯開始變得晶瑩剔透．

解答 Suddenly，a boy fell off the back of the bus．He hit the road face down and rolled over．He lay motionless in the middle of the road as the bus drove away quickly．The cars directly behind the bus braked to avoid the boy，but none stopped．I knew that if the boy was bleeding into his brain，he could die soon（高分句型一）．I stopped my car．I lifted his unconscious body into my car with the help of some passersby and raced back to the hospital．
The next day，when I went to see the boy，all his family got up，with grateful smiles on their faces．The mother held my hands and started weeping．"Son，you are an angel，"she repeated over and over again．After comforting her，I went over to the boy．He managed to smile and squeeze my hand．No words were spoken between us-none was needed．I spent the rest of the day in a state of excitement，the most fabulous mood I had ever experienced．Driving home that evening，I knew what I wanted to do for the rest of my life．My career path became crystal clear at that moment（高分句型二）．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．