Question

【題目】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

Christmas Day was coming. I was just a kid then, and my big sister told me there was no Santa Claus. I fled to my Grandma because she would be straight with me. I knew Grandma always told me the truth. Grandma was home, and I told her everything. She was ready for me. “No Santa Claus !” She shouted. “Ridiculous! Don't believe it.” That rumor has been going around for years, and it makes me mad, plain mad.

“Now, put on your coat, and let's go.”

“Go where, Grandma?” I asked. “Where” turned out to be Kerby's General Store, the one store in town that had a little bit of just about everything. As we walked through its doors, Grandma handed me ten dollars. “Take this money.” she said, “and buy something for someone who needs it. I'll wait for you in the car.” Then she turned and walked out of Kerby's.

I was only eight years old. I'd often gone shopping with my mother, but never had I shopped for anything all by myself. The store seemed big and crowded, full of people competing to finish their Christmas shopping. For a few moments I just stood there, confused, holding that ten﹣dollar bill, wondering what to buy and who to buy it for. I suddenly thought of Bobby Decker, who was a kid with bad breath and messy hair. He sat right behind me in Mrs Pollock's grade﹣two class.

Bobby Decker didn't have a coat. I knew that because he never went out for recess during the winter. His mother always wrote a note, telling the teacher that he had a cough, but we kids knew that Bobby Decker didn't have a cough, and he didn't have a coat. I would buy Bobby Decker a coat! I settled on a red one, which looked really warm, and he would like that.

“Is this a Christmas present for someone?” the lady behind the counter asked kindly, as I laid my ten dollars down. “Yes.”

The nice lady smiled at me, put the coat in a bag and wished me a Merry Christmas.

Para 1:

That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper.

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Para 2:

Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker's front door to open and finally it opened.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1:

That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper. She wrote “To Bobby, From Santa Claus” on it, after which she drove me over to Bobby Decker's house, explaining I was officially one of Santa's helpers. Grandma parked down the street form Bobby's house, and I took a deep breath, and dashed for his front door. Seeing no other people notice us, I put the Christmas present down, pounded his doorbell and then Grandma and I hid in the car.

Paragraph 2:

Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker's front door to open and finally it opened. Out went Bobby Decker. Seeing the coat in the bag, he looked very astonished and then called his mother to go out. After hearing them say “Thanks” to Santa Claus, I felt very proud of what I had done. At that time I decided to be Santa's helper for ever. It was on that night that I realized the truth that he who has no Christmas in his heart will never find Christmas under a tree.

【解析】

這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫作文。

通過閱讀所給文章可知，作者的姐姐告訴作者世界上沒有圣誕老人，作者逃到奶奶那里想要聽奶奶說實話，結(jié)果奶奶把作者帶到一個商店，給了作者10美元，讓作者給有需要的人買東西，于是作者給坐在自己后面的Bobby Decker買了一件紅色的外套。

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：那天晚上，奶奶幫我用圣誕包裝紙把大衣包好。所以后文應(yīng)該是講述作者和奶奶如何去給Bobby Decker送外套的經(jīng)過。第二段開頭是：奶奶和我屏息等待Bobby Decker的前門打開，終于它打開了。本段應(yīng)該寫Bobby Decker收到外套后的反應(yīng)，以及這件事后作者的內(nèi)心活動，作者為自己的所作所為感到非常自豪，決定永遠(yuǎn)做圣誕老人的幫手。

最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。