Question

第Ⅱ卷
第四部分：短文改錯(cuò)（共8小題，每小題1分，滿分8分）
假如英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有8處語言錯(cuò)誤，要求你在錯(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
　　　2.只允許修改8處，多者（從第9處起）不給分。
One day I deeply felt the deep mother love surrounding me. I went to home for lunch quickly after school, because there would be a exam in the afternoon and I had expected to return to school early to prepare for the exam. And when I got home, the lunch was not ready yet. I felt very happy. When two dishes were seen, I found neither I liked. I ran out of my house angry and walked on the street for a while. Then I walk to school. When I got into the classroom, one classmates told me that my mother had brought my lunch box here. After opened the box, I found my favorite food inside. My eyes were filling with tears.

Answer 1

One day I deeply felt the deep mother love surrounding me. I went to home for lunch quickly
去掉             
after school, because there would be a exam in the afternoon and I had expected to return to
an                
school early to prepare for the exam. And when I got home, the lunch was not ready yet. I felt
but               
very happy. When two dishes were seen, I found neither I liked. I ran out of my house angry and
angrily          
walked on the street for a while. Then I walk to school. When I got into the classroom, one
walked          
classmates told me that my mother had brought my lunch box here. After opened the box, I found
classmate                                                   opening                  
my favorite food inside. My eyes were filling with tears.
filled        

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