Question

14．Mrs Smith heard her new neighbor would come and moved into his new house，but she hadn't seen him．One day when she came back，she saw a man wear a brown hat and dark glasses carrying a ladder on his shoulder．The man put the ladder against the window of the new house and went up to break in the window．Mrs Smith said to himself，"Thief，it is a thief．"She rang up the police immediate and soon two policemen appeared in the front of the house．When the man was told to hand in everything what he had stolen，he looked greatly surprising．It was then he understood the reason why the policemen came．He said in a smile on his face，"I can't find my key．It's my new house．"

Answer 1

分析 史密斯夫人聽說新鄰居要來了，但還沒看過．一天她回家時，看到一個人爬窗戶，于是打電話給警察說有小偷．警察來要這個人交出偷的東西時，這個人笑著說："我鑰匙找不到，這是我的新家．"

解答 Mrs Smith heard her new neighbor would come and moved into his new house，but she hadn't seen him．One day when she came back，she saw a man wear a brown hat and dark glasses carrying a ladder on his shoulder．The man put the ladder against the window of the new house and went up to break in the window．Mrs Smith said to himself，"Thief，it is a thief．"She rang up the police immediate and soon two policemen appeared in the front of the house．When the man was told to hand in everything what he had stolen，he looked greatly surprising．It was then∧he understood the reason why the policemen came．He said in a smile on his face，"I can't find my key．It's my new house．"
詳解：
1．moved改為move；動詞錯誤．句中move和come作并列謂語，位于情態(tài)動詞would后，要用動詞原形．          
2．wear改為wearing；分詞錯誤．句中wear作man的后置定語，要用非謂語動詞；wear與man之間構(gòu)成主謂關(guān)系，要用表示主動的現(xiàn)在分詞．         
3．in改為into；短語搭配錯誤．break into打碎，闖入．     
4．himself改為herself；邏輯指代錯誤．句意指代的是Mrs Smith，表示女性，要用herself來指代． 
5．immediate改為immediately；副詞錯誤．句中immediate修飾的是謂語動詞rang up，要用副詞形式．  
6．去掉the；短語搭配錯誤．in the front of表示內(nèi)部的前面；in front of表示外部的前面．   
7．what改為that；連詞錯誤．句中he had stolen作everything的后置短語，是一個定語從句；從句缺少賓語，且先行詞everything是不定代詞，要用that來引導(dǎo)．
8．surprising改為surprised；形容詞錯誤．句中surprising作系動詞look的表語，且表示主語he的感受，要用過去分詞構(gòu)成的形容詞．      
9．加that；句型搭配錯誤．it was…that…強調(diào)句型，對he understood the reason why the policemen came then中的時間狀語then進行強調(diào)．           
10．in改為with；介詞錯誤．句意表達的是伴隨狀態(tài)，要用with短語作伴隨狀語．

點評 短文改錯題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識．�？嫉闹�識點有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯誤），動詞（時態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會考查邏輯錯誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯誤；找錯誤要以動詞為主，動詞或與動詞有關(guān)的錯誤占了改錯的題的重要一部分．