Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的好友Jeff發(fā)郵件詢問(wèn)你在今年漫長(zhǎng)的寒假期間幫助父母做家務(wù)的情況。請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 具體的內(nèi)容：

2. 個(gè)人的感受；

3. 勞動(dòng)的意義。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jeff,

I’m glad to hear from you and I’d like to share my experience of helping my parents do housework.

On a regular basis, I first do the dishes, sweep the floor and clean the windows and the table. Then I dust the TV set, sofa and other furniture. Tired as I am, I have a sense of achievement and feel proud of myself.

Not only does doing housework allow us to experience the hard work of our parents, but also helps us to be independent and build up a sense of responsibility. It is a rewarding thing.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇提綱類寫作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，假定你是李華，你的好友Jeff發(fā)郵件詢問(wèn)你在今年漫長(zhǎng)的寒假期間幫助父母做家務(wù)的情況。請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1. 具體的內(nèi)容：2. 個(gè)人的感受；3. 勞動(dòng)的意義。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：hear from (收到……來(lái)信)；do housework (做家務(wù))；do the dishes (洗碗)；a sense of achievement(成就感)等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。