Question

【題目】文中共有10處錯誤, 每句最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下面劃一橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞。

2. 只允許修改10處，多者從第11處起不記分。

Dear Jim,

How is everything going? Today I'd like to tell you something about our school sports meeting. It was holding on Oct.6, when was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds and broke in the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done. Looking forward to receive your letter.

Yours,

Li Ping

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】holding改held

【2】when---which

【3】attend改attending

【4】finish改finished

【5】去掉in

【6】success前加a

【7】my改our

【8】winner改winners

【9】that改what

【10】receive改 receiving

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】holding改held 考查時態(tài)語態(tài)。根據(jù)was可以判斷是過去時態(tài)，并且運動會是被舉行，應該采用被動語態(tài)，故改為held。

【2】when---which 考查定語從句的引導詞，根據(jù)句意可知是指那是很美好的一天，故改為which。

【3】attend改attending 考查語態(tài)，根據(jù)句意可知很多老師和學生是主動的參加，應用主動語態(tài)，故改為attending。

【4】finish改finished 考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)前文可知作者是在描述過去發(fā)生的事情，應該采用一般過去時。故要改為finished。

【5】去掉in 考查動詞短語搭配。Broke the record表示打破紀錄，中間不需要加介詞，故要去掉in。

【6】success前加a 考查冠詞的使用，success在表示成功的事情時是可數(shù)名詞，故加上a來修飾。

【7】my改our 考查人稱代詞。根據(jù)前面的we可知是我們盡自己的最大努力，故改為our。

【8】winner改winners 考查名詞單復數(shù)，one of the后面應該接可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)，故改為winners。

【9】that改what 考查主語性從句的引導詞。What引導賓語從句，表示我們所做的事，故改為what。

【10】receive改 receiving 考查動詞短語搭配。Look forward to后面接動詞的-ing形式，故改為receiving。