Question

15．假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Tom給你寫信說他最近沉迷于吸煙，結(jié)果影響學(xué)習(xí)，作業(yè)不能及時完成，上課不能集中注意力，于是給你寫信求助．請你用英語給他寫一封建議信，為他停止吸煙提幾條建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Tom，___________________________
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放類作文，根據(jù)提示信息用英語給Tom寫一封建議信，為他停止吸煙提幾條建議，寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點(diǎn)：吸煙的危害及幾條建議． 2．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be addicted to 對…上癮； be harmful to對…有害；worse still 更糟的是； a waste of 浪費(fèi)；therefore因此； in order to以便，為了As is well known to us all，smoking will be harmful to you in many ways．（高分句型一）To begin with，they will waste too much valuable time which should be spent on your study or other beneficial things．（高分句型二）
In order to live a meaningful life，you can read more good books，take more exercise to build you up or participate in some social activities to expand your horizons．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
     I felt very worried when I heard that you are addicted to smoking．As is well known to us all，smoking will be harmful to you in many ways．（高分句型一）To begin with，they will waste too much valuable time which should be spent on your study or other beneficial things．（高分句型二）In addition，smoking  will do harm to your health．Worse still，it is a waste of money to smoke a lot．Therefore，I strongly hope that you can break away from it．The earlier，the better．In order to live a meaningful life，you can read more good books，take more exercise to build you up or participate in some social activities to expand your horizons．（高分句型三）    Looking forward to your good news．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．