Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

In a freezing cold day in January 1994,Jiesang Suonandajie found what he was looking for—a group of poacher who were killing the endangered Tibetan antelope.Jiesang knows he had to move quickly.He shouted to the poachers to put away their guns.Although being surprised,the poachers had a advantage there were more of them.In the battle what followed Jiesang was shot and killed.When its frozen body was found hours late,he was still holding his gun. He had given his life save the Tibetan antelope.

Answer 1

【答案】1.In→On

2.poacher→poachers

3.know→knew

4.away→down

5.刪除being

6.a→an

7.what→that/which

8.its→his

9.late→later

10.添加to

【解析】1.句意：在1994年1月一個極冷的日子。Day前面有限制詞修飾，用介詞on。

2. a group of一群，一組，后面用名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把poacher→poachers。

3.本文講的是過去的事情，句子用一般過去時態(tài)，故把knows→knew。

4.句意：他向偷獵者大聲喊，讓他們放下槍。put away收起來放好put down放下。故把away→down。

5.句意：盡管感到吃驚，但偷獵者有人多的優(yōu)勢。此處是過去分詞做狀語，故把being去掉。

6. advantage以元音開頭，故把a---an。

7.句意：在接下來的斗爭中。此處the battle是先行詞，指物，在后面的定語從句中做主語，故把what→that/which。

8.句意：數(shù)小時后當(dāng)他的尸體被發(fā)現(xiàn)的時候，---。故把its→his。

9.句意：數(shù)小時之后。故把 late→later。

10. 句意：為了救藏羚羊他獻(xiàn)出了自己的生命。此處是動詞不定式做目的狀語，故在save前加to。