一家英語報(bào)社向中學(xué)生征文,主題是“十年后的我”、請根據(jù)下列要求和你的想象完成短文。
1.家庭
2.工作
3.業(yè)余生活
注意:1.字?jǐn)?shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3.開頭語已為你寫好。
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.
One possible version:
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future .I think my life will be very different in ten years .I will be twenty –eight years old by then .I will have my own family .Probably with a lovely child .I hop I will work in a computer company as a program designer .I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues , I will do a good job in whatever I do . In my free time , I will continue to take regular exercise , such as swimming , running and various ball games. On my holidays , I will travel around the world . In a word , my life will be much richer and more colorful .
【解析】
試題分析:本篇書面表達(dá)是英語報(bào)社向中學(xué)生的征文,主題是“十年后的我”,需要學(xué)生根據(jù)要求和想象完成短文。提示的要點(diǎn)有:家庭,工作和業(yè)余生活。根據(jù)要求可以確定文章應(yīng)該使用將來時(shí)態(tài),而且用第一人稱來進(jìn)行講述。提示了三方面要點(diǎn),所以文章可以分為三個層次,要注意層次之間的合理自然的過渡。也就是需要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞。此外,為了增加文章的亮點(diǎn),還需要盡量使用高級詞匯和句型。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇范文文字簡練,層次清晰,要點(diǎn)全面,語言流暢自然,基本完成了寫作任務(wù),是一篇較好的短文。在文中作者充分發(fā)揮想象,使用第一人稱來描述10年后自己的工作,家庭和生活,內(nèi)容符合文章的要求。在文章中作者還使用了很多短語和多種句式,增加了文章的采分點(diǎn),比如 in my free time , in a word , take regular exercise , whatever I do ,等等。
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