Question

 短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
假定英主事課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請您修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語文錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜錢（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday. There were lots of visitors stood in front of the ticket window. We waited a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunate, I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for him, but I had no luck. Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions. Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers.

Answer 1

【小題1】去掉on.考查介詞。
【小題2】stood改為standing或前加who
【小題3】buy 改為bought;
【小題4】too 改為so
【小題5】frighteden 改為frightening
【小題6】Unfortunate 改為Unfortunately
【小題7】hard前加a
【小題8】him 改為them
【小題9】alone改為lonely
【小題10】covered 改為 covering

解析試題分析：上周日，我和父母去公園。在看老虎的窗口站著很多的游客。我們等了很長時間才買上票。我急切地去看老虎，匆忙中和父母走散了。沒有人陪伴，我感到非常孤獨。更為糟糕的是，我身上沒錢，只好步行回家。
【小題1】去掉on.考查介詞。My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday. 在以last，next，tomorrow開頭的短語前不加介詞，故去掉on。
【小題2】stood改為standing或前加who�？疾槎ㄕZ。There were lots of visitors stood in front of the ticket window. 本句是there be句型，句中有謂語動詞，所以stood改為非謂語動詞，stood和邏輯主語visitors之間是主動關系，故用現在分詞，把stood改為standing。
【小題3】buy 改為bought; 考查動詞時態(tài)。We waited a long time and buy three tickets。And 連接兩個謂語動詞，表示連續(xù)的動作，應該都用過去時，把buy改為bought。
【小題4】too 改為so考查副詞。I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd.。從結構可知此處是so ……that 引導的結果狀語從句，前面是be eager to do，所以把too改為so。
【小題5】frightened 改為frightening 考查形容詞。 I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd.。以-ed結尾的形容詞說明人的狀態(tài)，以-ing結尾的形容詞是描述事物的特征，此處指老虎，所以用frightening，意思是令人害怕的。
【小題6】Unfortunate 改為Unfortunately 考查副詞。Unfortunate, I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for him。逗號前是副詞修飾全句，把Unfortunate改為Unfortunately。
【小題7】hard前加a 考查冠詞。I had hard time looking for him。固定短語：have a …… time “過著…..的日子”，所以在hard前面加a。
【小題8】him 改為them 考查代詞。I had hard time looking for him。從上文可知作者是和父母走散了，所以把him改為them。
【小題9】alone改為lonely 考查形容詞。I felt alone without any companions. Alone“獨自一人”，lonely“孤獨的，寂寞的”，此處表示內心的孤獨，把alone改為lonely。
【小題10】covered 改為 covering考查非謂語。so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers. 從句子結構可知此處是分詞做狀語，和邏輯主語I之間是主動關系，應該用現在分詞，把covered改為covering。
考點：考查短文改錯