Question

假設(shè)你是李華，你班同學(xué)李陽(yáng)和趙民發(fā)生爭(zhēng)吵，關(guān)系很緊張。原因是李陽(yáng)晚上在寢室打手機(jī)，趙民覺(jué)得這影響了他的休息。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合此事，并根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，向?qū)W校英文報(bào)“Happy Teens”專欄投稿。

簡(jiǎn)要描述事情經(jīng)過(guò)	在寢室打手機(jī)，影響休息
分析沖突原因	遇事不冷靜 ..........
談一下避免沖突辦法	根據(jù)自己經(jīng)歷感想，提出至少兩種

1、詞數(shù)100左右。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2、作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. ____________________________________
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Answer 1

Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. Last Sunday evening, Zhao Min was sleeping soundly when suddenly Li Yang’s mobile-phone rang. Li Yang answered it but he spoke so loudly that Zhao Min was waked up. So he complained to Li Yang angrily about the noise. As a result, it turned into a horrible quarrel.
To be honest, it was Li Yang’s fault because he shouldn’t have used his mobile-phone in the dorm but Zhao Min was also to blame — they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things.  
Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others’ place.

試題分析：考查提綱類作文的寫作。話題是李陽(yáng)和趙民，要點(diǎn)是以提綱的形式表示的，包括描述事情經(jīng)過(guò)，分析原因，和解決辦法，要適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，不能只是把要點(diǎn)翻譯成英語(yǔ)、，注意改變文章的樣式。不能寫成提綱式，難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。Li Yang answered it but he spoke so loudly that Zhao Min was waked up.這句話用了so that句型，  To avoid such conflict，we should be kind to one another, which is of importance to enjoy a harmonious life in the dorm.這句話是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，還要使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接各要點(diǎn)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。To be honest, As a result,等
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類作文的關(guān)鍵在于表達(dá)方式的選擇和要點(diǎn)的完備，不能有遺漏或者省略。因?yàn)楸疚牡囊�求是不能寫出提綱式，所以在寫作的時(shí)候要變換句式，不能一個(gè)句式一成不變，要給讀者新鮮的感覺(jué)。