20.假如你是李華,正在英國(guó)留學(xué).你的朋友小林高中畢業(yè)后打算到英國(guó)留學(xué),他寫(xiě)信詢問(wèn)你什么樣的中國(guó)學(xué)生最受國(guó)外高校青睞.
請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給對(duì)方寫(xiě)一封回信:
(1)語(yǔ)言是道硬門(mén)檻;
(2)適應(yīng)能力很重要;
(3)興趣愛(ài)好被看重;
(4)要有社會(huì)責(zé)任感.
注意:
(1)詞數(shù)100左右;
(2)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).
Dear Xiao Lin,
I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter.
Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.(高分句型一)
As far as I know,the language ability is essential,which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses.(高分句型二)Besides,you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment.What's more,your interest is valued as well,for it has a lot to do with success.Last but not the least,those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.(高分句型三)
This is some of my advice,and I hope it can be of some help to you.May you succeed!Best wishes and good luck.

Yours,
Li Hua.

分析 本文是一篇應(yīng)用文.也是高考?嫉奈捏w形式之一.文章給出了簡(jiǎn)單的漢語(yǔ)提示,成文時(shí)需要考生充分發(fā)揮想象力,使文章內(nèi)容豐富.成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意一下幾點(diǎn):1.文章內(nèi)容要齊全;(1)語(yǔ)言是道硬門(mén)檻; 2)適應(yīng)能力很重要;(3)興趣愛(ài)好被看重;(4)要有社會(huì)責(zé)任感.2.時(shí)態(tài):用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí);3.人稱:第一人稱和第二人稱;4.使用一些高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)及句型,提高文章的檔次;5.恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ),使文章自然、流暢.
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】1.高級(jí)句型:Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.the language ability is essential,which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses.those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.2.連詞和插入語(yǔ):As far as I know,Besides,What's more,Last but not the least,

解答 Dear Xiao lin,
     I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter.Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.(高分句型一)
     As far as I know,the language ability is essential,which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses.(高分句型二)Besides,you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment.What's more,your interest is valued as well,for it has a lot to do with success.Last but not the least,those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.(高分句型三)
     This is some of my advice,and I hope it can be of some help to you.May you succeed!Best wishes and good luck.
                                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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C.have a pleasant talk
D.watch TV
9.Three days before graduation,Bill asked Mark to talk because heD.
A.hoped to go on holiday together
B.wanted to kill himself again
C.hoped to have lunch together
D.wanted to tell him his story
10.What would Bill probably say at last?A
A.You saved my life.
B.I should die.
C.You did a good job.
D.You helped me a lot.

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