Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的留學(xué)生朋友 Peter 發(fā)郵件告知他在校中國詩歌朗誦大賽中獲得二等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件，

內(nèi)容包括：

1. 表示祝賀；

2. 肯定他賽前的準(zhǔn)備；

3. 希望他繼續(xù)努力。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯： 中國詩歌朗誦大賽 the Chinese Poetry Recitation Competition

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I'm glad to hear that you won the second prize in the Chinese Poetry Recitation Competition held by your school. I'm really happy for you and I'd like to send my sincere congratulations.

I think you deserve what you have gained. Before the competition, you discussed with me about choosing a Chinese poem suitable for you to recite. Then you practiced the recitation every night, thus reciting the poem fluently and accurately. Additionally, you consulted your Chinese teacher, took his professional advice and patiently made improvements. It is because of your full preparations that you have performed excellently.

Congratulations to you again and I hope you can keep learning Chinese poetry and achieve more.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，對(duì)朋友獲獎(jiǎng)表示祝賀，并希望他繼續(xù)努力。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1.表達(dá)祝賀。

2.肯定他賽前的準(zhǔn)備工作。

3.希望他繼續(xù)努力。

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

be delighted to do, be happy for, give my sincere congratulation, deserve the prize, because of , keep learning, make great achievements

第三步：連詞成句

I'm glad to hear that you won the second prize in the Chinese Poetry Recitation Competition.

I'm really happy for you.

I'd like to send my sincere congratulations.

I think you deserve the prize.

I hope you can keep learning Chinese poetry and make great achievements.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改

用賓語從句，過去分詞短語作定語連接句子：I'm glad to hear that you won the second prize in the Chinese Poetry Recitation Competition held by your school.

用賓語從句：I think you deserve what you have gained.

用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型：It is because of your full preparations that you have performed excellently.