Question

11．假設(shè)你校學(xué)生會(huì)定于 4 月 10 日組織一次高三學(xué)生的登山活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，以學(xué)生會(huì)的名義用英語(yǔ)寫一則通知，歡迎同學(xué)們積極參加．
1．活動(dòng)目的；
2．集合時(shí)間；
3．活動(dòng)內(nèi)容及注意事項(xiàng)．
注意：1．詞數(shù) 100 左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文流暢；
3．通知的格式已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Notice
In order to encourage Senior Three students to take exercise and relax themselves，we're going to organize a mountain-climbing activity on April 10．（高分句型一）We're to gather at the school gate and start at 7：20 a．m．by bus and get back at 7：00 p．m． We'll climb Mangshan Mountain in the morning，on the top of which we'll have a picnic at noon．（高分句型二）In the afternoon we'll be divided into groups and have a free time． Remember to take photos and make notes for the photo exhibition or the essay contest to be held later at our school．Besides，take your lunch and drinking water with you．If you want to join，please come to Student Union and sign up before April 5．
Student Union
March 30．

Answer 1

分析 本次作文要求學(xué)生會(huì)定于4月10日組織一次高三學(xué)生的登山活動(dòng)，以學(xué)生會(huì)的名義用英語(yǔ)寫一則通知，歡迎同學(xué)們積極參加．要點(diǎn)包括：目的；地點(diǎn)；內(nèi)容與要求；溫馨提示；寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇條理清楚，要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫．其句式上的變化既使得文章生動(dòng)而流暢，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力．例如：定語(yǔ)從句on the top of which we'll have a picnic at noon．被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)we'll be divided into groups．不定式的被動(dòng)to be held．In order to，make notes，essay contest等詞匯及Besides 等連接詞．高分句型：
（一）We're togather at the school gate and start at 7：20 a．m．by bus and get back at 7：00 p．m 用be to do 來(lái)表示將來(lái)，強(qiáng)調(diào)務(wù)必要準(zhǔn)時(shí)集合．
（二）We'll climb Mangshan Mountain in the morning，on the top of whichwe'll have a picnic at noon．這個(gè)句子用介詞短語(yǔ)加關(guān)系詞來(lái)引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，即on the  top of+which，意思是在山頂上．
（三）Remember to take photos and make notes for the photo exhibition or the essay contest to be heldlater at our school．此處用動(dòng)詞不定式的被動(dòng)形式來(lái)做定語(yǔ)表示將來(lái)，非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞運(yùn)用恰到好處．

解答 Notice
      In order to encourage Senior Three students to take exercise and relax themselves，we're going to organize a mountain-climbing activity on April 10．（高分句型一）We're to gather at the school gate and start at 7：20 a．m．by bus and get back at 7：00 p．m． We'll climb Mangshan Mountain in the morning，on the top of which we'll have a picnic at noon．（高分句型二）In the afternoon we'll be divided into groups and have a free time． Remember to take photos and make notes for the photo exhibition or the essay contest to be held later at our school．Besides，take your lunch and drinking water with you．If you want to join，please come to Student Union and sign up before April 5．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Student Union
                                                                                                                                                                                                           March 30

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．