Question

13．下面是你同學(xué)的一篇英文習(xí)作，請你幫助修改這篇作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改僅限一次．
         2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Alibaba founder Jack Ma，his company has been valued at more than $ 221 billion of which Ma owned 6%，is put in the top position among China's wealthiest．But he stays outside the list of the world's 10 rich people．
Fought against a hard life，young Ma still managed to learn English well enough to gain a degree and became a teacher．Afterwards he started a translation agency in which took him to the US，where he introduced to the Internet．His fate was bound to change before he was accidentally appointed to take an American visitor Jerry Yang，a co-founder of Yahoo，in a tour of the Great Wall．The meeting obvious proved to be a turning point for all of them，promoting the birth of Alibaba and later cooperation with Jerry Yang．

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：本文主要介紹了阿里巴巴的創(chuàng)始人馬云．馬云的公司股價(jià)2210億美元，他占6%的股份，他位于中國首富之榜，但他在全世界十大首富名單之外．年輕的時(shí)候，馬云生活艱辛，但他通過努力成為了一名老師，后來他成立了翻譯機(jī)構(gòu)，這使得他去了美國，同時(shí)被介紹上網(wǎng)．他的命運(yùn)從此發(fā)生了變化，偶然的機(jī)會他被委托帶領(lǐng)雅虎創(chuàng)始人之一Jerry Yang去參觀長城，這個(gè)會面是他們兩人的人生轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)，促進(jìn)了阿里的誕生已經(jīng)后來和Jerry Yang的合作．

解答 Alibaba founder Jack Ma，his company has been valued at more than $ 221 billion of which Ma owned 6%，
                                     whose                                                                                             owns 
is put in the top position among China's wealthiest．But he stays outside the list of the world's 10   rich
                                                                                                                                               richest
people．

Fought against a hard life，young Ma still managed to learn English well enough to gain a degree and
Fighting
became a teacher．Afterwards he started a translation agency in which took him to the US，where he

∧introduced to the Internet．His fate was bound to change before he was accidentally appointed to take an
was                                                                                   when
American visitor Jerry Yang，a co-founder of Yahoo，in a tour of the Great Wall．The meeting obvious 
                                                                                on                                                         obviously
proved to be a turning point for allof them，promoting the birth of Alibaba and later cooperation with Jerry
                                               both
Yang．

1．his-whose  考查定語從句．本句中含有定語從句，從句中缺少定語，所以用whose．
2．owned-owns  考查時(shí)態(tài)．本文主要介紹馬云，此句中表示馬云所占股份，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．主語是第三人稱單數(shù)，所以用owns．
3．rich-richest  考查形容詞最高級．世界上十大富人，應(yīng)該是最富有的十個(gè)人，所以應(yīng)該用最高級．
4．Fought-Fighting  考查非謂語動詞．本句中，主句前面應(yīng)該用非謂語動詞形式，fight 和主語之間的關(guān)系是主動關(guān)系，所以用現(xiàn)在分詞．
5．去掉agency后面的 in  考查定語從句．本句中含有定語從句，從句中缺少主語，所以應(yīng)該直接用關(guān)系代詞．
6．在introduced前加was  考查被動語態(tài)．本句中表示他被介紹上網(wǎng)，所以應(yīng)該用被動語態(tài)．
7．before-when考查連詞． 本句中表示：在他被委托帶領(lǐng)雅虎創(chuàng)始人之一Jerry Yang去參觀長城的時(shí)候，他的命運(yùn)從此發(fā)生了變化，所以用when．
8．in-on，考查介詞搭配．on a tour 一般來說是用于表示"在…的就旅途中"．
9．obvious-obviously 考查副詞，本句中修飾動詞，所以應(yīng)該用副詞．
10．a(chǎn)ll-both 考查代詞．本句中表示馬云和Jerry Yang 這兩個(gè)人，所以用both．

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