請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示,并結(jié)合具體事例,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.

注意:①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題; ②除詩(shī)歌外,文體不限;

③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的具體事例;

④文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng);

⑤詞數(shù)不少于120,如引用提示語(yǔ)則不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

 

It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society.

I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.

As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.

【解析】

本文是篇英語(yǔ)材料作文,材料非常簡(jiǎn)單,學(xué)生很容易把握寫(xiě)作要求和寫(xiě)作目的?忌趯(xiě)作之前必需認(rèn)真審題,首先要注意文章是要求結(jié)合具體的事例,所以一般都是發(fā)生過(guò)的,故描述是要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。既然是具體事例來(lái)理解,因此最好用第一人稱(chēng)。再有就是寫(xiě)的事例內(nèi)容一定要符合所給的主題,并形成文章主題的首尾呼應(yīng)從而提高作文的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章第一句It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society就鮮明概括并亮出了作者的觀點(diǎn)。文中使用了定語(yǔ)從句I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon以及非限制性定語(yǔ)從句which drove off quickly都為文章增色不少,一些短語(yǔ)和短句的使用也恰到好處比如knock down,drive off,be proud of, rush to sb to do sth,compare with等并注意了句子的銜接如: when, luckily 等等。

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