Question

【題目】假定你是辰星中學(xué)的學(xué)生會主席李華。你校將于本周末舉辦英文戲劇節(jié)(English Drama Festival) 請給外教Kelly寫一封信，邀請她前來觀看并擔(dān)任評委。主要內(nèi)容包括:

1. 主題: Love English & Love Drama

2. 時間: 周日晚上19:00-21:00

3. 地點: 春蕾劇院

4. 參賽隊伍: 高一的十個班級

5. 聯(lián)系人: 李華(電話81691511)

注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Kelly,

My name is Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union of Chenxing Middle School.

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Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】My name is Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union of Chenxing Middle School. I’m writing to invite you to join the English Drama Festival this Sunday and be our judge.

In order to arouse students’ interest in learning English, we’ve planned to hold an English Drama Festival, the theme of which is Love English & Love Drama. Teams from ten classes in Grade One will compete with each other in Chunlei Theater. The competition will begin at seven in the evening, lasting about two hours.

We would feel much honored if you could join us. If you have any question about the festival, please call me at 81691511. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文屬于材料作文中的邀請信。邀請信在形式上具有簡短、熱情的特點。通常適用于一些平常的事情的邀請，而且邀請人同被邀請人之間很熟悉。一般邀請信格式一般分為：第一， 說明與收信人的相關(guān)性與寫作意圖。 第二，寫清邀請的時間（年、月、日、鐘點）、地點、場合。第三，具體交代事情發(fā)生的地點以及具體的時間等內(nèi)容。

亮點分析：本文結(jié)構(gòu)合理，內(nèi)容要點齊全。文章以簡單句為主，語言相對簡短，熱情。文章中運用了結(jié)構(gòu)較為復(fù)雜的定語從句（…the theme of which is Love English & Love Drama.）和If引導(dǎo)的狀語從句：We would feel much honored if you could join us.和If you have any question about the festival, please call me at 81691511.同時還運用了非謂語作狀語（The competition will begin at seven in the evening, lasting about two hours.）這些句式的運用，給文章增添了色彩，有了層次感，也是增分點。